honestly I liked it and agree that most if not all yun che's harem are in all other fan fics and at least she has emotions unlike frozen cloud

I'm a United fan so you could make city lose but I doubt that would happen since u seem to be a city fan but apart from that it's a good story

honestly i dont think this will last long but its nice and relaxing for me it's a good change of pace from op mc always training fighting f×××ing repeat