he should always say "thank you heaven for this meal" before any hard battle

thank you for trying to make an original story. thank you for taking risks.

good chapter

rip gorn

this but unironically

Nice chapter name. Also, poor lightning sect. the sect master is acting so smug, without knowing who he just took in

even my will would be shaken if i could scare everyone with just my aura... sneaky heaven

I feel like you've repeated the will thing far too many chapters in a row. Still enjoying the book, though. But maybe it would have been better to space it out a bit more, because it currently feels like those 8+ chapter fight scenes, except it's about the guy not getting complacent

Good book. Don't want to leave a review yet because i'm still at the beggining, but it's a good book. Must be the only original fiction i've read here which actually has quality.