masterboo
of reading
152
Read books
So old man and his super powerful force, let assassins wander around freely, knowing they have weapons with incurable poison? I mean what could possibly go wrong.... They act like they have everything under control, but really they are about as useful and effective as a condom with holes in it; as in any protection or effectiveness is due to luck and not through any meaningful effort on their part. but don't worry they have the place locked down so the assassins won't escape.... lol
Claims to be the greatest martial artist on earth... knows one move... straight punch.. I mean collapsing fist.... uses it repeatedly... lol What move will you use next... idk probably collapsing fist. It reminds me of playing street fighter games, low kick, low kick, low kick lol
Just gonna say this, His mother is objectively a bad mother. It's fine to allow him to be bullied, but the thing that makes her a failure is that she hid her strength and allowed the bullying to go to far. She allowed people to underestimate her and that combined with her allowing them to bully him, made them cocky enough to kill her son. No excuses can change the fact that she allowed a bully to kill her son. Thanks for the Chapter
I feel this scene is poorly written. Dongfang Xui comes off as petulant as opposed to desperate, which is what I would expect her to be if the person she likes was just sucker punched by a man way more powerful than him. I mean if it wasn't the mc, anyone else would be dead and she talks and acts like he might be just a little hurt.
Her past being horrible doesn't excuse future behavior. She should understand more than anyone what it means to be forced to wear that collar.... You can argue and justify however you want, i.e. she did it to teach him, she didn't treat him that bad etc., but she betrayed his trust and forcefully enslaved him and there is no good excuse for that. Then again everyone, especially his family, seem to be missing a few screws.
Wow, what a ride. This is definitely one of the best web novels I have read. There were a few parts that seemed to drag, but for the vast majority was entertaining. Though, the later chapters seemed to lose the magic of the earlier chapters, when the mc was scarred and running around. Later, it felt like he went from super cautious to the all-knowing puppet master. Mainly because the author seemed to distance us from the mc. We were no longer watching him plan and work, but more watching his plans unfold as he explained. There are definitely more scenes I would have liked to see before the end, but it was wrapped up way better than 98% [img=recommend]) of the other web novels I have read. It was sad to see some characters just thrown aside and barely talked about later, such as his aunt master, his grandmaster, the poison expert from from the du sect etc. His master kind of got screwed and I would have liked to see some sort of happy ending for him, but maybe there was in the original story of the heavenly courts. I know very little about the original story of the heavenly courts, which probably made this story more confusing then it could have been, trying to keep track of all characters, etc. As always, thanks for the translation. I hope they will translate the last side chapter and put post it.
I really enjoyed the beginning of the story. The author created an interesting world. Then after the mc defeats his first sovereign, the author throws out all the previous mechanics and the story hits light speed. Its like the author started holding his breath and wouldn't start breathing again until the story was finished. After that, it was still a decent story, but it just rushed through soo quickly that it felt like the condensed, abridged version. The power ups became ridiculous. Where before it would take several chapters to level up, he would just start gaining 10s to 100s of levels at a time, leaving the reader with little understanding of what it even meant. All characters, besides the mc, were basically shoved to the side, but mentioned occasionally so that you know that they were not forgotten by the author, just abandoned. The author either was somehow forced to quickly finish his whole story, grew bored or just became too lazy to continue it properly. He took what could have been a really great story and reduced it to a decent read.
It was a good story. My only real complaint is that this feels like the abridged version. It is like the author rushed the whole story as soon as the mc beat his first sovereign. The author, essentially, just through away all the mechanics and struggles from the beginning of the story. Not to say that it needed 3000+ chapters of filler, but the story could have been a little slower, methodical and more fleshed out. Maybe somewhere between 500- 1000 chapters would have been nice. Seeing the mc slowly building up, taking out some more sovereigns before the war, Interacting with his household more and spending more time on the mechanics that made the beginning so interesting.
This guy is kind of dumb... He is super rich... why not just move. The mc cant really go that far, distance wise. If he started spreading out and relocating the mc wouldn't be able to do much to him. I know that moving comes with risks of its own, but if he is careful and does it right he will be fine and can continue to grow.
In my life I have dealt with many stones, In my experience, catching a rock aware would be a far greater feat... lol I want him to sit in front of the stone and absorbs/eats it lol The look on everyone's face as the divine saint eats their forbidden stone... Thanks for the chapter!