If you came for what the synopsis says strap in it will be a while I’m at chapter 80 and still haven’t got to it yet good story so far but I am getting tired of this huge prologue hope it gets to the story I came for before I quit reading for taking to long and wasting my money

Hi love the story so far and want more as fast as you can but can we please stop with the micro chapters by pure content of what is in the chapters you only really have like between 5 to 10 chapters of real content out of the 47 you got so far. From a writing point it looks like your stuck in the trope that chapter has to end in a certain way and then stoping there like the cliffhanger in the last few chapters unless your writing this on your phone then I don’t blame you for the micro chapters [img=recommend]

Sorry but you mest up if he is going out the east gate he can only go three ways east north or south not west if he goes west he goes right back in the gate to the city he have to go out the west gate to go that way otherwise he’s walking all the way around the city to go west

This same as last chapter please fix Asap had to pay for this chapter

It was stuck on that short two paragraph chapter for a long time you posted two or three chapters more before it fixed itself and got the whole chapter up and it was a important chapter so there was no point in reading more till it was fixed Thanks for fiXing it now im all Caught up keep the chapters coming And You have have a good one

Hi you need to repost this chapter first before poting more please you have posted two so far without the fix if you dont fix it i cant read anymore no matter how mAny more chapters you post

Ok looked it up britsh english why ive never seen it the def ingot was noun of invigilate wich is supervise canDidates during an examination they need to use a different word like proctor or examaner it flows better invigilator stoped me dead in my reading i couldnt figure out How to read that word at all i thought it was fake word at first and Had to go by context to figur out what they ment

Invigilator ok what language is that from i dont think thats a word in english ive been changing it to examaner or proctor in my head evertime i see it