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Lucca_Maia2yrPostedThe writing quality is good, but not to the point of a 5/5, sometimes I feel that the author is not a native English speaker (this is not a criticism of the author, but in a way, a compliment) The speed of sending chapters is very inconsistent, which makes it very frustrating to follow the novel, and sometimes the author does not communicate with readers, leaving us in the dark. Story development is a serious issue here: Okay, we know why we're here, right? R18 is normal after all it's in the TAGS, but it becomes a problem when the author creates an interesting world, but any development is barred because any female living being that breathes in this world automatically wants to have s*x with the MC. The characters (especially the early ones) are the highlight of the story, and in a way, the MC is the least interesting of them all. Obviously we have the background of the world, which is interesting and, if used well by the author, promises a lot. I left it as four stars because I believe in the future potential, but I would leave it as 3.5. Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 3/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 4/5 Final: 3.8/5
- Lucca_Maia2yrCommentedCh 681 My Brother Is Talented!
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- Lucca_Maia2yrCommentedCh 114 The Cursed Pair Makes its Move
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- Lucca_Maia2yrCommentedCh 821 I Have Always Paid Attention to You
- Lucca_Maia2yrCommented
Ohhh Rita, volta desgramada! Volta Rita que eu perdoo a facada...
However as soon as he was turned Rita squeezed the ring tightly and sneered. - Lucca_Maia2yrReplied to I_Am_L_72
- Lucca_Maia3yrCommentedCh 779 Spiritual Root of Restoration