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Mattao313

Mattao313

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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Commented

    isn't that a form of lying?

    Outwardly, he pretended to be excited.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Replied to JRI_JUJU

    yes a site that could literally help people find teammates to fight monsters in a world that literally already has the internet is somehow never thought of. that's just bad writing.

    Ch 26 TwitFlick [2]
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Commented

    why wouldn't wilderness survival be a mandatory course?

    "Wonderful! This is wonderful! You're such an astute young man! Don't you worry. In four whole weeks, I will make you immortal…
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Commented

    I don't get it. Why not just stay low key why make everyone dislike you and draw attention to yourself in a negative way? feels like a forced plot point and pretty stupid.

    Ch 21 First Performance
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Commented

    story went from decent to terrible pretty fast. how can a alternate modern society with friggin magic not have equivalent stuff to Facebook and freaking fried chicken. dumb story.

    Ch 26 TwitFlick [2]
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Commented

    a world with guilds and internet how don't they have a Facebook type website. Also just because he has computer science knowledge from earth doesn't mean it would apply to this world. The plot holes are starting to show.

    Ch 25 TwitFlick
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3131yr
    Replied to Aris82

    they were gonna rob him it was never stated they'd kill him. Also some people aren't psychopaths going around killing people.

    I left them like that. After a minute or two, they will be freed naturally. I decided to spare their life.
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3132yr
    Commented

    the book is wack he already had a cheat now he's just op. he can literally write his own plot armor.

    Ch 11 Book [2]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Mattao313
    Mattao3132yr
    Commented

    I can already see the plot holes forming

    Ch 5 Guidance
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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