StoneBreaker97
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StoneBreaker971dCommented6. Why are you such a cutie pie? (Comment)- StoneBreaker971dCommented
yes
4. Is the pace enjoyable for you? (Y/N) - StoneBreaker971dCommented
Keep pace, maybe a bit more violence.
3. The story to move away from canon faster, or slowly deviate? (Y/N/Comment) - StoneBreaker971dCommented
No
1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment) - StoneBreaker972dPosted
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Nice
'That's so out of character,' Gabriel thought. 'But then again, this isn't a story anymore. These are real people with real lives. I gotta stop thinking like I'm a character in a book. This is my life now.' - StoneBreaker972dCommented
That's faster than Usain Bolt...
Gabriel started with a light jog on the treadmill, his body feeling strangely unfazed. He kept bumping up the speed; 10%,20%, pushing it higher until the machine maxed out at a blistering 28 miles per hour. Even at this insane pace, his body felt invigorated, almost like he was taking a leisurely stroll. - StoneBreaker972dCommentedStepping on the gas, Gabriel roared out of the garage. Using his recent memories, he steered the car towards downtown Forks. As he cranked up the radio, a familiar song filled the car - a pleasant change from the LA music.
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A good start. 👍
A hand, warm and comforting, rested on his head. He felt a gentle ruffle of his hair, a last farewell from the only guide he'd known in this strange purgatory. - StoneBreaker972dCommented
So... plot armour?
Enhanced Performance Under Pressure: user's skills and abilities are amplified in critical moments, allowing him to excel when the stakes are highest. - StoneBreaker978dCommentedGoten's new appearance was similar to Trunks's, but his hair and the aura flames around his body were green.detailReborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-SignAnime & Comics · Clay_Champion
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so brother or cousin...?
"No, please, he is my grandfather's grandson, he would surely want the body, but do not worry, the family will not ask for retaliation or anything, after all, everyone witnessed that it was a fair fight," she said, not to mention that the man practically sealed his own death sentence as soon as he challenged Jon. - StoneBreaker978dCommented"Alright... We'll call him Jon." Jon decided, imagining their son.
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One of those babies is definitely gonna be killed, starting a war.
"Seryna. I want you to avoid any master who tries to approach you. If someone tries to do that, let me know. Don't let anyone get close and don't consume anything that isn't prepared by our men. These guys are plotting something and I don't like it at all." Jon spoke despite this, he still had to open his trade with the nobles and buy resources that only the Reach could provide him. Jon had spoken with a bit of anger, after all, all their actions made him distrust them, and it seemed they had malevolent intentions. - StoneBreaker9713dCommentedAs he relaxed, letting the heat envelop his body up to the neck, Jon felt a sudden interruption in his tranquility. A ball of lava hit his face, causing him to open his eyes. Before him, emerging from the lava, was a small creature of curious and enchanting appearance. It was a reptile as white as snow, with majestic wings that seemed immune to the scorching heat. Its eyes were like two small shining sapphire jewels, fixed on Jon with an almost human intensity.
- StoneBreaker9713dCommentedAs he relaxed, letting the heat envelop his body up to the neck, Jon felt a sudden interruption in his tranquility. A ball of lava hit his face, causing him to open his eyes. Before him, emerging from the lava, was a small creature of curious and enchanting appearance. It was a reptile as white as snow, with majestic wings that seemed immune to the scorching heat. Its eyes were like two small shining sapphire jewels, fixed on Jon with an almost human intensity.
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Still looks better than me...
[Current Masao Image (in Discord)] - StoneBreaker9715dCommented
1000 hours max
But the growth potion wasn't the only thing he developed during his thousands of hours in the laboratory. He made a kind of drug that gave him a temporary physical boost. Of course, there were some side effects, but Jon minimized them in his development and made sure that nothing would be permanent if he knew how to control the dose, using it only in emergencies.