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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to Brezer

    thanks!! i have enough stupid MCs in my library.

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    The Legacy System
    Fantasy · crazy_immortal
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to fran007

    i like the novel. i find it interesting. only too slow and reiterating in the same things

    Ch 22 Practice Partner
    altalt
    Single Stat System
    Games · Jimar_Jemar
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    Too much words for a few real actions. Please don't artificially enlarge the words count.

    Ch 22 Practice Partner
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    Single Stat System
    Games · Jimar_Jemar
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    i was thinking the same

    Kubei looked sly, "Of course I could tell you that. However, you’ll need to agree to some of my requests. Firstly, you’ll do this; secondly, you’ll do that; thirdly, you’ll do that too. There will be no use in killing me, as once the noble young master returns to his home, news about you will be spread. Once that happens, hehehehehe…."
    altalt
    When A Mage Revolts
    Fantasy · Yin Si
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    9 out 10 kidnapers approve this

    Just like how you could only pick up your child from a kindergarten after school. There was no use to try and collect another child as they would not follow you regardless of how loud you called for them.
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    When A Mage Revolts
    Fantasy · Yin Si
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to joh9wick

    what jungle?

    Kubei suspected, even if he managed to escape from Michelle’s grasp, this body would probably faint in the middle of the jungle and end up feeding the beasts in the jungle anyway.
    altalt
    When A Mage Revolts
    Fantasy · Yin Si
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    You can go across Korea and others islands. Then Siberia. There is a thing named clothes if you are cold. The conflict excuse with Russia is really poor. Thinking about miles and miles of their frontiers, without tecnology nor comunications.....you can't go at night??? you can't fly???? the story logic take my nerves...... mc is like a 5 yo boy looking for his mom.

    That being said, Leon had no idea of how to go back home alone. To cross the ocean, he would have to train more; to travel through the land, he would have to deal with three nations fighting for hegemony, and the last option was to reach America by following the east side of Russia. If the monsters don't kill Leon, the cold would.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    from now onwards i'm not going to think about how retarded is the mc. from now onwards i'm not going to think about how retarded is the mc. from now onwards i'm not going to think about how retarded is the mc. from now onwards i'm not going to think about how retarded is the mc.

    The damn thing had twenty meters of length, and it was five meters wide. Its mouth was so big that it could eat Leon in a single bit, the monster was looking at Leon waiting for him to fall and Leon froze when he saw those vicious red eyes, but soon he recovered because he wouldn't die there. Using the same blast of wind that he used to move the boat, he hit himself to fly back to the island. Leon's bones started to break like sticks, but that was nothing. The fear of that damn thing made him ignore the pain. Fortunately, his body was much lighter than the boat, and a blast of wind made him fly for dozen of meters.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    he should make himself a brain

    Two months passed, and Leon kept training his skills vigorously, and even though he still wasn't satisfied with the level of his new skills, he decided to make his first attempt to escape that island on the first day of his sixth month on that place. Leon barely could create a knife made of steel, so he decided to cross the ocean in a boat made of earth.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented
    "I should eventually learn it, but it shouldn't be my focus…"
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to TallicaStew

    Thats too much PTSD

    Leon created a box that had the same size as a backpack, and since it was all made of earth, the surface of it was so rough that it could easily peel Leon's skin. Nevertheless, he had to endure that. Leon tried to run with it on the beach and noticed that he had lost a lot of his speed, the box had almost fifty kilograms so that it couldn't be helped.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to dear_insanity

    Correct. And the ship.... and the arrows.....he could manipulate wood like elfs

    Leon created a box that had the same size as a backpack, and since it was all made of earth, the surface of it was so rough that it could easily peel Leon's skin. Nevertheless, he had to endure that. Leon tried to run with it on the beach and noticed that he had lost a lot of his speed, the box had almost fifty kilograms so that it couldn't be helped.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    and they can feel his presence

    "I guess it is finally time to make a few prototypes of boats."
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    make a deposit with sea water. connect it to a second. use fire to evaporate the water in the second. collect that water in a third deposit.

    Rain in that part of the ocean was unpredictable as always; sometimes it would rain an entire day, sometimes it would rain for half an hour. Regardless, Leon had to make good use of it. Leon had to work for a while, but he managed to find the points where it would be easier to gather water and connected those points to his camp using aqueducts. Since he could create an infinite amount of trees, something like that wasn't trouble. Just a bit time-consuming.
    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    make ice arrows

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    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to Eric_Fanguy

    He is arguing about the needed componets to create fire from nothing. So create fire the old way and then magic

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    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to littlepotatoprince

    There is a fase named documentation. That means learn about what you are writting before write it. He is not idiot only ignorant. Anyway aside this "pearls" the story is interesting.

    "Let's see.. even if I can't fly, if I manage to create a boat with ice or earth. It should work… I just have to put some holes in it to store the air, and the thing will float… but first, I have to learn the basics."
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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Commented

    it's easier use the bow to rotate a stick over another. than being a brute clashing random rocks.

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    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to Faded_4532

    and you end with your hands beated with the hits

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    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • fran007
    fran0072yr
    Replied to Aquartiz

    Considering that he is thinking about building a ship that can navigate across the waves in the ocean. The logic is equal to a child. And running hundreds of kilometers over the ocean when he is tired of dashing a few meters...... He rely on the system but the story rules are being too convenient and laxing.

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    altalt
    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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