Thank you for the chapter.... a good story so far :)

Love the quote from watchmen.

If it is a re-write, I was wondering if the bit about him being "in the wrong universe" can be taken out? It is the only thing I did not like in the novel storyvise. But are looking forward to the continuation of the story anyways.

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It is the right chapter now..for me atleast.

I like this fanfic... only thing is I think you went trough the shinobi world a bit too fast... think there would be a lot more story to gather from there, but still works though (for me at least..since I am still reading) but..I have a tendency to like op mc.... so the one piece arc so far have been good... thank you for the chapters..and hope you never just drop it like sooo many other fanfics I have liked..

Seems like you are missing some chapters there... but thank you for the chapters anyway