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Leonidian97

Leonidian97

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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to LordRhyolith

    Am I blind? I don’t think she gave him any pills for this to even be a valid concern…

    Ch 79 79. Test
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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    I have to. WEST VIRGINIA~ MOUNTAIN MAMA~ TAKE ME HOOOOMMMEEE. It’s a shame that even this “beautiful” lady is gonna die one day. Probably to the MC

    Ch 75 75. Door of light
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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    Let’s not talk about how releasing a force 7x greater than your maximum would break your arms. Shizuo Heiwajima anyone?

    From this, one could see the power of the Seven Steps Fist.
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    God-Like Extraction
    Eastern · Fruit of Chaos
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    Alright my phone isn’t letting me do this in paragraphs so a bunch of corrections are coming. I’ll only do this for the first chapter though. Be aware that I’ll likely be re writing it just without the grammar issues that are glaring at me

    Ch 1 Prologue: Into the Void
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    Legendary Assassin's Saga: Reincarnated into Wastrel
    Fantasy · empressblackrose09
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Posted

    So I’m only in the first chapter but the amount of grammar errors is astounding. I’m going to continue reading cuz someone left a damn glowing review, but be aware my final review will be off 10-15 chapters

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    Legendary Assassin's Saga: Reincarnated into Wastrel
    Fantasy · empressblackrose09
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    He’s the rank 4 dude…

    "Why would we lock it? I'm here, after all," he said.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to Ajnaran

    On top of all the other comments, when you find a topic someone is truly passionate about they won’t stop. I found a girl who hated downstream pollution so much that she spent 45 minutes of her workday just monologing about it with little to no input from me aside from attention

    "If I store any items with Fire Mana or Water Mana inside this Space Ring, it will be ruined by the end of the day," she finished. "After all, this Space Ring has been created with Metal and Earth in mind. Storing Ice-related items is somewhat okay, but the Ice Mana shouldn't be too strong."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    You can stop skimming here <.>

    The officer saw that Shang seemed to have relaxed, and she released a quiet sigh.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to Littledutch

    So the lady showed up. She doesn’t like the lead guard but can’t do anything to them, proceeds to make a very minor fool of herself. The MC then allows her to defend her subordinate, thus allowing her to make up for the “loss of face”. Now she is saying “I don’t want or need your help doing my job”

    Shang nodded. "Fine, I won't do it again."
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    But is she a world stopping beauty? Is this MC gonna whöre around like others, stay 100% pure? Or maybe just hold out and find the impossible first love = true love? Find out next time on ——!

    Second of all, she didn't hide her suspicion and hostility while talking to the leading guard.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to Simone007

    Easily? Try going ~7 months without being able to even think of your own name and being punished when you do… there are plenty of cases where someone left by themselves will lose their sense of identity. Either that or make a ”friend” to help stabilize themselves

    And then, Shang scooped up the coins.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to L_y_n_x

    If you want questionable pacing look at novels that end after 150 chapters, or at RPP that has the MC in the first 15 levels of a game for ~120 chapters then has them level up 10 times in the next 50 just to stop all levels for 150 chapters

    Alex knew that the God was the actual reason for all of this, but feelings often didn't follow logic. Even though Alex knew that there was no reason to dislike his old name, his emotions still felt a strong feeling of dislike towards it.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to EuryEvans

    Ropes originally started as plant fibers tied together so it is possible… but also just a plot mechanic since most plants in a cold environment don’t tend to get that stringy

    It took him some minutes, but he managed to repair the cage somewhat. Alex knew how to make robes and how to create basic structures due to his long time in the wild.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to jimolrame

    For the Americans, that is circa 93mph

    Alex's breathing and heart rate quickened as the sled wagon reached 150 kph in a matter of seconds.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    And it’s senses that allow it to feel the wind vibrate as we go in for an attack

    No, the problem was the fly's ability to change trajectories in an instant.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    This really confuses me. In theory if this isn’t breaking bones then it should just be bruising him. Is he claiming that bruising muscles is more efficient than tearing them…? How is this even an exercise

    Alex never had had a good opportunity to see if the Mana's regenerating properties also worked on his bones. Logically, it should, but Alex wasn't sure of the extent.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    Distill blood…? Boil the water out of the blood? Sure…?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Replied to Leonidian97

    Not viable to -> not viable for anything

    Alex tied his sword to his back with some makeshift rope made out of grass, hiding it behind his back and coat.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    Also, congrats you can no longer draw your sword. Putting a sword on the back is not viable to very short swords and nicked scabbards. You have to consider how long your arm is (mine is 1 meter) so if I wanted to back draw I’d need a sword shorter than that

    Alex tied his sword to his back with some makeshift rope made out of grass, hiding it behind his back and coat.
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Leonidian97
    Leonidian971yr
    Commented

    Actually… fun fact about blood. It’s got so many metals in it and is so viscus that it takes more water to break it down than what it provides

    Alex's body shivered. 'I'm not so desperate yet. I can think about drinking blood when I'm about to die of thirst.'
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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