just a translation error thanks

HO ok I thought you said I was the one who passed the OC for batman so I didn't understand, yeah I agree that's why his powers developed because of his father which makes more sense than an 8 year old finding that.

I don't understand

thank you the problem is I'm French so the words have been translated so when I translate I do it with the French version but I start looking for the English version first thank you for reading and giving the corection

Thank you for all the comments sometimes it's translation problems because I am French so the sentences were translated differently in French. I tried to correct as much as possible but I think I will redo the first 11 chapters thank you for reading

ha yeah thanks I never thought of doing that

ok, I'll change the - by the " " because you are not the only one to tell me that they are not used to, thanks for the review

no I corrected it thank you

I corrected, again, but I think I'll rewrite the first 10 chapters but for now I'm still waiting if people like the story but thanks for the help with the mistakes. yes I am not English

I never respond to spoil but there is a surprise in the long run

I know he's a pure blood but I'm talking about the way he thinks about pure bloods

if I remember well, for Ron all the pure bloods are fanatics ?

no just a mistake

I've been told this before, so I'm starting to manage the POV better from chapter 13 onwards. since it's my first novel I'm making mistakes, Maybe I should rewrite the first 10 chapters but I'm waiting to see if people really like the story. THANK YOU FOR READING

I didn't know how to turn the romance because I had two characters in mind but finally I figured out how to solve the problem so it won't be a trio

le heros deviendra puissant c'est sur mais en même temps que tout les autres car c'est un des problème je trouve c'est que le MC augmente sa puissance mais tout les autres non et c'est la que l'histoire pour moi devient ennuyante, alors pour la magie je vais m'inspiré de pleins de truc mais ils fonctionneront a la manière d'Harry Potter exemple si je m'inspire des sort de Bleach il seront modifié pour être utilisé dans Harry potter avec des noms a la harry potter. Je sais pas si tu as compris ce que je veux dire. je ferais en sorte que les nouveaux sorts s'intègres dans le monde normalement ce chapitre devait être publié demain donc je vais l'effacer dis moi si tu la lu

ha ok it's because I use the "" to show that the characters sing the spells

I would like to know what bothers you in the conversation so that I can improve.

if you continued reading, is it better afterwards?

I saw your messages, then it's my fault if it's a bit confusing, I'll try to be clearer after it refers to the boy