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Vallandres7hReplied to AmazeAngelonope
"Umm, I'm not really sure what is going on, but there is still more for me to report. We have also discovered that Gettan, the de facto leader of the Merchant Union, is in cahoots with the cult. He was also planning to start a collapse of trust to destroy Mitsugoshi, but his plans haven't been put into action yet."- Vallandres20hReplied to ImpureThoughts
yeah, I just realized it when I read further
"My father trusted you and see what happened, he sacrificed his life for the sake of this village and now his son in living like a beggar..." - Vallandres1dReplied to GodlyMadara
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Even if it's AU, checking some relevant information is a must
Also many people are saying that things don't match with canon or something.....so this is an AU from now on looool, just kidding. The thing is I watched naruto long ago and I forgot everything... - Vallandres1dCommented
Well dates are like that, you should be prepared in that cringe situation in the future when you get your soulmate 😅
(A/N: .....Yeah yeah I know it was cringe. FUCK, GODDAMIT I DIDN'T THINK I WOULD STRUGGLE SO MUCH TO WRITE A DATE CHAPTER.!!! - Vallandres1dCommented
just use it as a practice
(A/N: Yup at the fking start. I'm never writing a date chapter ever again, nah, nuh uh. I'm done with this cringeness💀) - Vallandres1dCommented
There's no way Kakashi would be that weak, author. It began turned me off..... Don't nerf the character just to make MC look stronger....just don't do it again in the future, research the character and the ability first that would be help
"he's strong...and smart, I thought he was just randomly attacking with the water needles...but he was targeting my chakra points, disrupting the flow of chakra..." Kakashi replied in a small voice. - Vallandres1dCommented(A/N: Sup, guys?? This would be the second or third time I have written an action scene, I did pretty good right? hehe
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I've already run out of it.....
Anyways, GIVE ME MORE POOOOOOWWWAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! - Vallandres1dCommented
I don't think this is boring though
(A/N: I know it was a boring chapter, but I had to write this you know? It'd be weird if suddenly naruto changed and no one said anything lol. - Vallandres1dCommentedCh 11 Chakra control
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I don't think so....save it for another girl later
"Ah, she's my daughter Tsunami, and he is my grandson Inari." He pointed toward us, "and these are the guys that protected me." - Vallandres1dCommentedCh 8 Find a cat?
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Guys, in reality sometimes doing this is the best choice.....
"Uhh...I don't know what I did but, Sorry!" I bow my head slightly, she was trying to act angry but her ears and tails were betraying her. The way they were twitching excitedly, it was clear that she was enjoying this situation very much. - Vallandres1dCommented
Well that's the truth, women are very complicated
'I used to hate the dense protagonists all the time and now I have to act like that. Now I am thinking it was not them who were dense, it was me who really didn't understand their intentions...' - Vallandres1dCommented
Too fast....
Swiftly, she took a step forward and hugged Naruto tightly, burying her face in his chest. She wanted to convey her feelings, tell him properly that she was a dumb idiot for not realizing his honest feelings. But, she held herself back, this was not the perfect time and situation for that, she had to correct her past mistakes one by one, step by step and when she will reach that point one day, she will confess her true feelings. - Vallandres1dCommented
Too fast, what about her feelings about Sasuke? Even though she begins to develop her feelings towards Naruto now, that doesn't mean she will change her heart this quickly. There should be conflict in her mind or hearth....
(A/N: Sup guys!! Damn I got emotional lmao, man watching all those K-dramas really helped hahaha - Vallandres1dReplied to Shuayeb_Ahmed
Agree, it's too fast
(A/N: Sup guys!! Damn I got emotional lmao, man watching all those K-dramas really helped hahaha - Vallandres1dCommented
A hug is not necessary, patting in the head is enough
I shook my head inwardly, and pulled Sakura into a hug. My right hand was below her shoulders clasping her tightly into my chest, while my left hand patted her hair slowly.