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First paragraphs kind of too crowded. but after that, story is smooth and addictive. I honestly enjoyed all chapter. Great chapter, thanks. [img=recommend]
A plot twist here!
Except update stability which I don't accept BloodsuckerWebnovel's rating clause everything 5 stars. So full point. Though i had only chance to read 3 chapters before writing this review. There is a very planned plot I can say so story develops nicely. All characters energic, yeah I didn't see any single cold, negative or mysterious yet. Maybe this can be a weakness of this story at future eheheh. It's very addictive that every character in action. Story style gives vibes of Wow+LoTr+Xuanxuan. Warning: Advanced english. Enjoy reading this fantastic adventure.
Thanks god i was reading martial peak before coming here that im used to read about cow headed bats or lion headed penguins, so i didn't suprise about the creature with six eyes at the ending lol. Great chapter. Looking for 6 words names next. Make me supriseeee [img=recommend]
Still 12 years old muscle girl , right? right
u mean Emryilda De La Vazgard? [img=exp]
my favourite character appeared, evil uncle with a lollipop.
Dang 4 words naming. so shameless [img=update]
I can think maybe he did this to show his emotions... Well same double thing also appear in synopsis. Yeah author-san check your synopsis pls.
Dang too many things happened. Great chapter. I was expecting she will remember her past but no something else appeared. Interesting.
your dad american with a japanese name and your mom japanese with an american name! wow ahaha. there are some small grammar mistakes but chapter was pretty more easy to understand comparing to previous ones. this was very captivating chapter. thanks.
*cough* this chapter reminds me a famous manga *cough* Looks like İris' new life will be very adventurous! Great chapter. Though maybe u must want to edit those power level explanations. not suitable with current form.