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  • sabada
    sabada1d
    Commented

    Yup I agree with the other comments the past few chapters are a plot drag this is killing the book I can already see through API the views tanked the last 15 chapters. Either mass release this arc or be ready for most to drop this book. Just so you know I like the book but this really is killing it for me

    Ch 248 Chapter 248: Troll vs Golem
    Harry Potter: Another Chance
    Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
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  • sabada
    sabada5d
    Commented

    Gonna be honest reading this after the first few chapters is useless; authors who do "past" days after seeing current plot is tasteless. I wonder if you wrote the whole book already if so you should have gone back and fixed these early chapters.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
    Harry Potter and the 7 angers
    Movies · AbrahamSmith
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  • sabada
    sabada12d
    Posted

    This is absolute ass ngl....... The timeline is fucked and the plot makes no sense You should delete this and rewrite it if you even care Good luck

    Harry Potter Self-Insert
    Book&Literature · NeverluckySMILE
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  • sabada
    sabada30d
    Commented

    O at least give us like a 3 chapter release or whatever to finish this whole arc

    Ch 50 Mastermind.
    Omnipotent Husband System
    Urban · Chasing_Dreams
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Commented

    Upload has been kinda slow; Just wondering have you thought about patreon? You'd make way more posting on there and moving this to fanfic section possibly (I edit for some on here and know they make a decent chunk)

    Ch 49 Meeting The In-Laws (2).
    Omnipotent Husband System
    Urban · Chasing_Dreams
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Posted

    Honestly this reads like crap; starts off by just offing 2 of the main people while the rest are slowly killed off. Like OC mentally fucked person just going around killing the whole plot at this point author.....Maybe give up on writing; its clearly not your forte

    SURVIVING ALONE IN TWILIGHT
    Movies · oneaboveall_47
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Replied to TheWandaShip

    So it has to do with a curse or something he has that he found out about that romance with certain people would only last for a short while before it crashes out. Gacha system can't all be OP powers and abilities some of it has negative side effects

    I hope you liked what I've done with the chapter, especially that ending scene! It was inspired by another Fanfic author "Alittlepiggy33" for his AMAZING fanfic of Modern Family "Re:Life with Karmic Gacha". However, I feel like the author FUMBLED HARD with the romance, AND it felt like the author of the fanfic CHANGED from chapter 170 onwards. The writing style was different from that chapter onward. About the romance, no spoilers :D But it's a triangle? Square? Just know there's drama, and no one gets the happy ending. I dropped it at chapter 170 anyways so I don't know how the romance is now, but it was a good 170 chapters that I read!
    My diary system in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Commented

    Would love a 4-5 chapter release here if possible to read this whole arc in one sitting

    Ch 37 Consolation.
    Omnipotent Husband System
    Urban · Chasing_Dreams
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Commented

    Mass release a few chapters to get people hooked

    Ch 21 chapter 21 Guardian Angel
    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Movies · LORD_INDRA_
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Posted

    Legit sentences are so ba. Translator needs to get an editor or quit translating.....................................................................

    I am a chaebol in South Korea
    Urban · KAKRONA
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Commented

    You need to get an editor big time these sentences don't read smoothly. Also you get he and she confused at times.

    Ch 3 Long live peace
    I am a chaebol in South Korea
    Urban · KAKRONA
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  • sabada
    sabada1mth
    Replied to IgnisPrimus

    Yea I hope people realize that the author has a patreon that is overpriced AF for what you get. So he cycles different books when patreon subs go down because people would rather wait a few days then pay basically 2-3 bucks PER CHAPTER. This shit should be pulled off from webnovel if I were them; gives scammer vibes

    Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness
    Book&Literature · SlyOW
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  • sabada
    sabada2mth
    Posted

    This has already been made its called golden viper here on web novel. Go look for it in the fanfiction listing................................

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  • sabada
    sabada3mth
    Commented

    Hey author have you thought of a p a t re o n? Like 15-20 chapters ahead of this for like 5 bucks?

    Ch 26 Chapter 25: Dual Casting
    HP: The Dream
    Book&Literature · Knight_Wolf
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  • sabada
    sabada3mth
    Commented

    last 10 chaps feel like filler that could have been done in 3

    Ch 209 Chapter 202: Strength of Kraken's 5th
    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • sabada
    sabada4mth
    Commented

    and dropped :D thanks for basically just going the book route now I don't have to waste my time trash author go back to fanfict.com loser

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: “The Path Unchosen”
    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • sabada
    sabada4mth
    Commented

    a lot of these chapters are starting to feel like filler bs

    Ch 71 Third Parchment
    Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
    Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk
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  • sabada
    sabada5mth
    Commented

    You need to edit the layout

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Petting cat for a while
    Hogwarts Card System: Story of Ted Epiphany
    Movies · QuillandPen
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  • sabada
    sabada8mth
    Commented

    author you good?

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  • sabada
    sabada8mth
    Commented

    where is the release

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