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it really breaks the immersion when you have western name and indian surname or vice versa
this shit always make me emotional, i wish i had something similar
1 trillion in cash!!!! really. there is total around 1.5 trillion cash currently flowing in USA. even if it is alternate world, things should still be some sort of grounded. completely flips the immersion
should not have done that author
is it??
alas , you are so good
really
Praises - I really liked your novel, the plot seems fresh , i have read many top novels on this site and currently inhuman warlock and this novel is on my daily to read list, and i really like both of them. the secrets really feels like secret and it is difficult to figure out what they are but still feels intriguing, this may seem basic but i am pointing out because there are other novel which are mediocre and are at top like blood warlock which also plays secret card but they are lame and easy to guess. improvement - currently there is none, but i hope that you atleast maintain this level of writing, but i would really like if you flesh out more of the world like you did with abyssals/zions mini-arc , with the other planets in solar system, like what is happening there and could it affect mc in future or not
cringe , how people are pushing for pronouns now as they are hot potato
is this me? now i know why i have no friends
this novel really is different, in all the other novel i can predict with good accuracy what is going to happen in given situation. but here it feels good to read something refreshing. still little bit cliche to have op grandfather, but still reasonable