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NexisX2yrCommentedIn a way though... It makes sense. So far in the story all the abilities and skills used by Tristan are a byproduct of an experiment done on him, whereas his sisters skills and abilities are her own talent and hard work(shooting practice) being shown imo
Seeing his sister able to do magic, and skilled in shooting, Tristan began to think that maybe, his sister was better suited to this world than he was.- NexisX2yrCommented
How does it get decided from when a character gets pulled and played? Minato seems to have all his skills so if it's near the end of thier past lives shouldn't Rin be summoned as a jinchuriki? What about kushina and Naruto? I haven't seen borouto so I'm not sure if Naruto is still kuramas partner, if yes then regardless of how old Naruto is when summoned he should have a tailed beast right?
Nohara Rin was just an ordinary Shinobi. - NexisX2yrReplied to NexisX
I'm just trying to be sarcastic not rude lol sorry if it seems rude
The family and friends of Minato were his wife Uzumaki Kushina, his son Uzumaki Naruto, disciple Hatake Kakashi, and his master Jiraiya. Only they can be summoned. - NexisX2yrCommented
Only... A sannin, one of the most genius prodigy, one of the most knowledgeable sealing expert/ex kyubii jinchuriki and the MC/also kyubii Jinchuriki ... *Only them :/ what a shame I doubt very much can be done by any of these useless characters* lol
The family and friends of Minato were his wife Uzumaki Kushina, his son Uzumaki Naruto, disciple Hatake Kakashi, and his master Jiraiya. Only they can be summoned. - NexisX2yrCommented
Logically he did the right thing by going small like a finger. And I like how plausible the dulled pain aspect is because of the pain threshold experiment.
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It's things like this that ruin some chapters for me. Do you think any God in odins pantheon or even Zeus pantheon talk to thier sky father like that? Behind thier back maybe but face to face like that... It ruins the flow of the novel in my opinion
"You better." Chhaya says, narrowing her eyes at me. - NexisX3yrCommented
Honestly if I were reincarnated and stuck as a slime... Twice, I'd also do something crazy like making sure Roy screams omaewa shinderu anytime he uses the slime as a weapon :/
"…fine. Then Kuro shall be my alias when we're combined like this." - NexisX3yrCommented
"This paella is TOOO SPICY"
"Adam," Hestia greeted as she entered the room, a plate of food in her hand, "I made paella," she added with a little smile. - NexisX3yrCommented
Well ... Leto = a wolf goddess, fenrir = wolf ...
Pure of heart, he was .... but if he fell into the wrong hands if his father managed to corrupt him... it would be the end of Midgard, so it was written. - NexisX3yrCommented
Pikachu
Lastly, his mother described a creature of lightning, whose control over the element was so fearsome that it was practically god-like. While there were other creatures, such as the lightning dragon John saw before that contained immense power, only this creature could stand at the top and claim it was the true ruler of lightning. - NexisX3yrReplied to NexisX
Not trying to upset you, just trying to give some constructive criticism.
Well, I do feel a little bit tired. Probably because I didn't take a single rest last night. Well... I guess it wouldn't hurt to... take a nap... - NexisX3yrCommented
My thoughts exactly, there has been no time to develop any kind of trust. You give her a way to not be punshied by disobeying you, fall unconscious in front of her... I understand this is your novel and a fantasy novel... But this is a little too crazy.
Well, I do feel a little bit tired. Probably because I didn't take a single rest last night. Well... I guess it wouldn't hurt to... take a nap... - NexisX3yrCommented
Really dumb
So I deposited every single stat point I had into the strength stat. - NexisX3yrReplied to NexisX
Also I understand he isn't demon straight up, and for all we know his body becomes a demons and his mind strays more toward a human, but I'm hopefully the author wants to capture the slow decent of the mind to resemble less human.
I hate it... No one should be chained up to their will... - NexisX3yrReplied to Reader_lalala45334
You don't have to be human to be humane and we absolutely have seen that you don't have to be humane to be human
I hate it... No one should be chained up to their will... - NexisX3yrReplied to Edgelord666
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Foreshadowing... This seems like the authors future excuse for when the mc does rash things ... Not a bad plot armor shtick if used correctly.
If he continued to sit around crafting detailed plans on how to most efficiently go about becoming a Supreme, she might just run out of patience with him and end his journey before it ever began. As such, Darius opened the main map and checked the nearest settlements around his location. - NexisX3yrCommented
In the first line of the chapter you mentioned purple eyes
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I was gonna give up this novel because I'm bored of sword novels ... I loved them once upon a time ... But reading your responses (surprisingly non toxic) I'm going to keep reading
After taking his time to go through the information of each and every Job, Sato decided on the Swordsman Class, due to his familiarity with melee classes in other VR games he had played. - NexisX3yrReplied to DankWieghty
... The apocalypse kinda happened, his parents died even if he wasn't as invested in the parent child relationship, he killed innumerable fallen humans (which are technically still former humans), then went through the door saw the eye, had his soul ripped apart and consumed by darkness. I think that's a decent amount for split personalities to develop. Also this is a fictitious story lol
"But buddy, although I'm angry at you, I must say that you are really powerful!" Caizher continued talking to his own body and felt amazed at it