dont worry, im rereading the entire novel to reconnect. ill be back in action in a week or so.

i certainly feel that as well. the storyline i thought up is fae too restrictive and the charm of this novel is its useless banter. if i put too much nonsense, there won't be much of a story progression so im hard pressed on whether to pick one or the other. But don't worry, I dont plan to give up on Bob and his friends.

honestly, no. but am i ok physically? yes. exams next week so im focusing on my studies

well, yes

yea, ive decided to divorce my wife to write more... hahaha

I'll work on it... Been on a burnout lately due to college. Thanks for the feedback.

and thank you for reading [img=recommend]

yea, the tournament took like 50 chapters which was longer than i expected. Although, I did set foreshadows so that it doesn't seem too out of place.

most readers haven't unlocked this part with fast pass yet.

i wanted to make the number of chapters Even

ah. looks like you already know whats going to happen next

there are a lot of dumb people in this novel

Glad you liked it. I'm going to start editing my work now. Hurray!

yep. thats a mistake. ill change that at once thank you, kind sir.

read the first chapter again

yea. i didn't have an outline at this stage. wait, i still dont

time skip on their part, which will be explained the later chapters

poggers

heavy is ded?

It's a unique find. I'm guessing the perspective of this novel is an experiment by the author and I find that fascinating. I'll be honest, I am not too keen at scrutinizing written text but I could not find any errors that disrupt the flow of the story. The story development aspect, I haven't read enough to properly rate. Still, as the reader is the main character, it is difficult to keep the reader perspective element. So I'd like to know how this goes. Update stability. It's a new book with 32 chapters. All in all. It's pretty interesting. I wouldn't say its the best since this isn't my type of novel but I think it's great nonetheless.