With this being China? Yes. You'd be seen as spitting in the face of a "top doctor in the world" as a not doctor and not peer. Unless he delicates out procedures, (spoilers: he doesn't) the only one you're calling incompetent is him. Are you trying to tell me that his fabulously rich parents didn't start with the best doctor they could for their cash cow?

An excellent first chapter!

The name of that game? Gwent

It's just low spirit particle density. Get to a place where they're thick enough and even liquid Spirit Pools are a thing.

Now, I hate the teacher as much as y'all, but at least he did change his mind rather than stubbornly sticking to his original, foolish decision.

No question for why things are cycled around the rain? Nothing about what makes the rain safest to move and feed? What predators are disadvantaged by the rain? Well, count yourself another anti-fan, Del.

The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it. The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking. The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings. The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay. My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.

If you're that impressed, then I'm disappointed that you don't support him by pointing him in a better direction.

Ah yes, advertising the details of your strengths and weaknesses. Not like anyone in this universe would be curious about that, especially after they killed off the rest of your superpowered family

It's something of a status indicator when someone switches language for the conversation partner. Whomever switches is taking the lower status, usually out of respect. With this being a place of service, to the plebeians, it's fine to make them speak French instead of Chinese, but for any guest, honored guest or VIP, this would be a major breach of status, forcing the guest to submit to the servant. I understand that this may be used to show the humility of the FL but if so, it shows that she doesn't understand her status or place.

Material exemption is usually a mixed bag kind of trait. Rituals and spells that need materials usually have them less for the spell and more for the caster. Imagine that you need something to represent the "aggression" in an offensive magic. You could do a funny interpretive dance, describe the damage and method in the chant or you could outsource it to a material like an arrow or a predator's tooth or claw. This trait usually lets you skip those steps by just passing mana instead. Everyone initially thinks this is fine, but when there's a +80% or higher cost, suddenly having something on hand to cut down on mana consumption is wise.

With the amount of extra things Yang has to say, I'm reminded of the greatest magician I've ever known: Uncle.

It's not your place to speak on the thoughts and opinions of your boss. It's fine to blame bad information, but unless you actually are the patriarch, it's above your pay grade to comment on this.

The one guy is relatively dead though. Even with medical tech improving, a crushed brain is essentially soup.

Right? There would be at least a waiting period of observation. Most people don't go on dates day after day, it's easy enough to pay off a potential suitor and underline it with a threat the next day. The author has kind of been cramming the story rather than growing it organically.

What kind of negotiator admits to kidnapping? Her family is rich enough to hire quality goons.

Also, he walked her all the way to the limo before making sure she was his date?

99% of it bought by the Tyrant King, Haha!

Very true. A native English speaker should know the difference in speaking to their master about "the mistress" versus "his mistress". The subtlety may be exactly that, but it should be noticed.

First off, it's been more than a year since I was here. Second, being charitable? I probably read it backwards and missed the "not". Not being charitable? We used to think all snowflakes were unique, and while that's technically true, they're actually divided into 35 categories. Leaves are plentiful and unique, but throw enough together and you're going to start having identical matches. I don't honestly care if it takes millennia of collecting leaves, taking pictures and using a competitive analysis database. Thirdly, thank you, but I don't care anymore.