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Madrak

Madrak

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Love to read, at any place, at any moment

2018-04-26 JoinedPeru
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  • Madrak
    Madrak3yr
    Posted

    The story had potential but the author pulls the same crap every time, no matter how strong the MC gets, and how many miracle encounters he has, everyone can get stronger than him at the same speed or even faster. Another thing, I'm not a native English speaker but the author's grammar is so bad I had seen MTL novels easier to read.

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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Madrak
    Madrak3yr
    Commented

    First, the grammar is giving us cancer sometimes (and English is not even my native language, even some mtl are way lighter to read than this) Apart from that, as other comments say, your are making the MC way over-ordinary and it's start to pissing us off, his improvements are too slow, etc.

    Ch 228 Top Fifty IV
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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Madrak
    Madrak3yr
    Commented

    MC doesn't think or plan enough, he's so far kinda dumb, leaving almost everything to luck, I don't like this, hopefully the author will make him mature or at least start using his head a bit more.

    Ch 527 Striking a deal!
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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