Xiomei
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Xiomei8mthReplied to MrThangHamGotta compare webnovels with similar good quality webnovels. Not Chunky Textboks/Publish books.
After getting up, he could see that it was already evening. The clock showed that it was 6:30 pm. He also noticed that he was incredibly hungry. He thought, 'I haven't eaten anything all day, no wonder I'm so hungry. I need to grab something to eat. I also need to act as a kid. I hope no one notices any changes in me' He walked to the door and heard a couple of noises outside. On opening it, he saw those 2 kids playing with each other. He recalled that their names were Sakai Eichi and Aoki Daisuke. Both were good friends with Fujin and also shared the room. Eichi had lost his parents in the Kurama assault too, whereas Daisuke had lost his during the 3rd great ninja war. Looking at Fujin, their faces showed concern and quickly ran to him. Daisuke asked, "Fujin, what happened, are you fine now?" Nodding his head, Fujin confirmed, "Yeah, I'm fine now. Sorry about before. Had a terrible headache." Eichi said, "Oh, that's a relief. We were worried about you." Right at that moment, a growling sound was heard, and all 3 kids looked towards Fujin's stomach. Fujin looked embarrassed and said while rubbing the back of his head, "Guess I'm very hungry" and Eichi remarked, "Figures, you've been sleeping all day". Daisuke then put his arm around Fujin and said, "Well let's go to the mess and see if there's anything there."- Xiomei8mthCommented
I thought it was " need a leap of faith towards the unknown".
"Well… You know what they say… When you don't know where to go, you sometimes need to leap of faith into the unknown" I said, walking to the door that was on Stan's left. - Xiomei8mthCommented
Bro how can he feel the weight, if he is not connected to an actual VR device then it's better not include such things. This breaks immersion and makes the reader feel stupid.
Han shook his head, he didn't want to think of the worse and lose his morale. The Scythe felt heavy in his hand. - Xiomei8mthCommented
Cows do have horns, just not as big and pointed as bulls. Bull = Thick and girthy . Cow= feminine
Han Jing imagined that if he were actually in the same spot as 'Han' then he would have been long gone and impaled by their horns. Yes, these cows had horns. Bless Becky and her taste in cows. - Xiomei9mthCommented
Hairy legs
But just when he was about to get out, he felt a large hand grab his hairy leg and try to drag him to the bottom of the lake! - Xiomei9mthCommented
Song Prepared Shuhang
Song Shuhang nodded thoughtfully and said, "That is to say, the next time I require a resurrection magical treasure, I'd better get one that has a 100% chance of resurrection, lest the resurrection result in failure. Or maybe I should prepare several other resurrection plans at the same time, so that should one plan fail, plan two or three may be successful, and so on and so forth." - Xiomei9mthCommented
Song Successfully Reborn Shuhang [img=recommend][img=update]
"As for the third possibility, it may very well just be his luck. Maybe the lustrous scholar has poor luck. You must know that when it comes to resurrection formations, it's not guaranteed that they will resurrect their target. The higher the power of the cultivator, the more difficult it is to resurrect them, and the lower the chance of a successful resurrection. It is not easy to be like you and be able to resurrect successfully every time." - Xiomei9mthCommented
GAME OVER.
"Then get ready to pay the landlord $800," Lu Xiaoyu responded with composure and an air of coolness. - Xiomei9mthCommented
Truly amazing (cool 6x).
The Scholarly Sage was truly amazing. Even a resurrection formation of his could attract all kinds of forces and make them dance for it. - Xiomei9mthCommented
She first has to ask if Chris (Abroad in Japan - Youtube) agrees or not to her affability
"Captain has always been this way. He often forgets things." As Rozanne walked by his side, she softly disparaged the captain, "Even my granny has a better memory than him. Of course, he only forgets the trivial stuff. Yea, trivial stuff. Klein, I'll call you Klein in the future. Mrs. Orianna is a very affable person. It is easy to hit it off with her. Her father is a watchsmith with excellent skill…" - Xiomei10mthCommented
Man hope the author cuts these big chunky paragraphs into smaller, more readable paras. Other than that this looks promising.
After getting up, he could see that it was already evening. The clock showed that it was 6:30 pm. He also noticed that he was incredibly hungry. He thought, 'I haven't eaten anything all day, no wonder I'm so hungry. I need to grab something to eat. I also need to act as a kid. I hope no one notices any changes in me' He walked to the door and heard a couple of noises outside. On opening it, he saw those 2 kids playing with each other. He recalled that their names were Sakai Eichi and Aoki Daisuke. Both were good friends with Fujin and also shared the room. Eichi had lost his parents in the Kurama assault too, whereas Daisuke had lost his during the 3rd great ninja war. Looking at Fujin, their faces showed concern and quickly ran to him. Daisuke asked, "Fujin, what happened, are you fine now?" Nodding his head, Fujin confirmed, "Yeah, I'm fine now. Sorry about before. Had a terrible headache." Eichi said, "Oh, that's a relief. We were worried about you." Right at that moment, a growling sound was heard, and all 3 kids looked towards Fujin's stomach. Fujin looked embarrassed and said while rubbing the back of his head, "Guess I'm very hungry" and Eichi remarked, "Figures, you've been sleeping all day". Daisuke then put his arm around Fujin and said, "Well let's go to the mess and see if there's anything there." - Xiomei1yrCommentedCh 57 Chapter 56
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ending should have: to no avail.
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I do not mind this extra bit, just hope that he adjust his mental state for what the cultivation world will throw at him without too much whining. It gets irritating fast if the whining is stretched more than necessary
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Overdramatic
Lucas's body trembled and he almost fainted looking at the grand sight before him. - Xiomei2yrReplied to Weirdo
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"What?" Han Jing frowned, what kind of mammoth size app was this? He uninstalled his favorite life simulation game, that weird shoot raiding game he downloaded on a whim, his farming game where he was a level 100 now, and even deleted a few of his beloved videos for good measure.