The problem is not the pace, it's the information in each chapter. If the chapter don't bring significant development to your story, increase the pace of just time skip.

Why the fuck would you post an MTL translation on this site without editing ?

excellent fanfiction. It lack a bit of character and world development but if the story continu, I hope it will be resolved.

Can you create a patreon account please ?

I looked for copper and I found gold. Extremely good story with 14 chapters. I hope the autor will release chapter with the samequality in the future !

It was really interesting. Don’t be afraid to have a MC with exceptional talent. It will be necessary later in the story to justify some situations

Burning damage halve physical attack in pokemon games btw. If a machamp was burned, it’s normally over for him

Exactly

Again, Nice chapter. The power stone are usefull to gain visibility in the fanfiction ranking (story Must have at least 15k words)

Original, I like it

It doesn’t make sense why heaven will want to kill him. As an otherworldly demon, he didn’t defy fate. For exemple thieving venerable was a venerable because It was the will of heaven will. It’s not clear or it’s AU

For information, Kaido got his DF AFTER the battle of god valley, gifted to him by Charlotte Linlin

I'm not gonna lie. I feel more like i'm reading journey of toji than the journey of zoro ... Zoro should be the one discovering curse energy, not the other way,him bestowing haki upon other, when he is 4...

I don't like the quality of the translation. There is too many error in the first 2 chapter that i couldn't appreciate the novel. Perfect exemple of a machine translated novel edited by someone who doesn't have english as his primary langage. Ps : English isn't my primary langage...

HORRIBLE translation. I thought i was reading MTL without editing a single phrase. Completely unreadeable.

This story is for the moment a 5/5. Need more update to know if it's a gem but I believe it has the potential. As long as the author has a direction, this story will go far.

It was a pretty good chapter.

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Can be better