It was really interesting. Don’t be afraid to have a MC with exceptional talent. It will be necessary later in the story to justify some situations

Burning damage halve physical attack in pokemon games btw. If a machamp was burned, it’s normally over for him

Exactly

Again, Nice chapter. The power stone are usefull to gain visibility in the fanfiction ranking (story Must have at least 15k words)

Original, I like it

It doesn’t make sense why heaven will want to kill him. As an otherworldly demon, he didn’t defy fate. For exemple thieving venerable was a venerable because It was the will of heaven will. It’s not clear or it’s AU

For information, Kaido got his DF AFTER the battle of god valley, gifted to him by Charlotte Linlin

I'm not gonna lie. I feel more like i'm reading journey of toji than the journey of zoro ... Zoro should be the one discovering curse energy, not the other way,him bestowing haki upon other, when he is 4...

I don't like the quality of the translation. There is too many error in the first 2 chapter that i couldn't appreciate the novel. Perfect exemple of a machine translated novel edited by someone who doesn't have english as his primary langage. Ps : English isn't my primary langage...

HORRIBLE translation. I thought i was reading MTL without editing a single phrase. Completely unreadeable.

This story is for the moment a 5/5. Need more update to know if it's a gem but I believe it has the potential. As long as the author has a direction, this story will go far.

It was a pretty good chapter.

no

no

Can be better

It's okayish

Yes, but the chapter are too short !

This is MTL with very few editing past chapter 5. So it's basically trash.

The quality of the translation is trash. I couldn't continu reading this story after 3 chapter. A pity, it seemed like an interesting story

Come on, it's obviously a devil fruit. And he needs the info of shakky to identify the fruit. The autor couldn't be more clear...