Come on, it's obviously a devil fruit. And he needs the info of shakky to identify the fruit. The autor couldn't be more clear...

Good story so far but still need a better character and world development before rushing the story. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

4/5 tou lost a point because thé reward for those arc weren’t great enough for the time spent in readind

He lacks an additional stats with his level up...

How can you say it ?Why is it horrible for you ? Because you don't read an OP MC with a system ?

Slow start, slow world building, slow character development. But little by little, it becomes a masterpiece. I hope the qualitie will continu.

Extremely good beginning of a fanfic. Not much is missing. I hope the author won't drop it too soon and won't drop the quality. It has the potentiel to be easily in the top 10.

It’s a great fate/zero fanfiction (the first one I read that isn’t garbage at least) Keep up the good job and update more often 😀. I hope the story will continu with fate/stay night

Nice :)

At the moment you hit 10 chapter, webnovel block all chapters on their website. Sa fait chié.

I use their website and I have the same problem, I can only read the first paragraph ... You are right, they want to push us to use their app (that i will never use).

Writing a fanfiction of HxH is extremely complicated because the original story is linear with very few world background. For the moment, the protagonist can progress outside this linearity. Create your world, create new characters, allies and antagonist. Create him a goal. Don't get locked in the story of gon and killua. You have great writing skills. You can do it !!!

Once again, a novel with trash english. It was probably MTL'ed : it killed my interest.

Your english butchered the story. We "readers" can't appreciate your work if we must decipher what you want to describe.

Rias, akeno and agares

alright. his power is OP

Really good.

Thanks for the chapter

This story has great potential !!! Author, don't give up easily this one.

There is a lot of typping error : pikachu /Ash were inserted in the story by mistake.