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I like very much of the scenes with kirena playing with the kids, another nice one was Kirena being a sub with Scarlet's mothers, I really enjoyed the whole book. I have no theory at the moment but I have a suggestion the system of paths you can synergize between the slots, two compatible gems can generate synergy improving their effects or even adding new ones in the same way that incompatible gems would be harmful, the possibilities are many.
Why I think the three goofs will end up delivering a new body to the will world. I think if it happens that way this clone would be able to grow independently just like the Kireina clones. This would open up many possibilities such as: she could embrace her relationship with kirena experiencing family love for the first time, or be like the master of the system with her own schemes, or just end up like another meal.
I found the idea of the genre Bender interesting, following the logic of this sasuke I believe that at some point he could go after Naruto, because he knows the "secret" (an interesting change and opposite to the original in my opinion) after all Yuna repulsed Orichimaru twice, it would be more logical to go after the strongest, every way starts with the weakest of the strong: Naruto. In my opinion it would be interesting to see Sasuke lose more bets than Tsunade until he finishes woman indefinitely, having hormonal attacks, falling in love with Naruto due to percussion, ending a yandere (or maybe not, let's forget that O_O), but well it's just an idea , the fic is yours and I will read what you write = D