Author, it would be good to make use of a character sheet, and if you already do then update it often, preferably every time the MC gets stats. It's already the second time you FORGOT he put 2 points into agility. And something happened with his strength. In chapter 80 he was lvl 5 (str:1/agi:0/int:0/end:2)....In chapter 107 he level ups to lvl 6 and puts one stat point into agility 0>1. Then in chapter 134 he lvls up to lvl7 and puts again another point into agility, but it doesn't go to 1>2, you forgot the earlier point and made it 0>1. In both cases mentioning the dream and how fast that bone zombie was and MC needed speed. Now in ch 172 he is lvl 8 with +5 stats, but somehow he has 7 strength (it should be 6) and 5 agility (should be 7), It's weird how AGI has been forgotten twice.

I could understand his behavior if MC was just a normal 15y from a normal and average family, but he is not. It's incompressible how a heir to a powerhouse's family, with a powerful evil father and an unfeeling cold sister, can be so immature, dumb and inexperienced. How much shielding did his mother do to create this pathetic creature, in an environment that would make anyone mature faster it had the opposite effect on the MC it seems.

What could possibly change? This world literally experienced a world-ending apocalypse and somehow everything in the past and present are still exactly the same for the MC. I don't even know why author pushed apocalypse in this novel, even just as mention, but why then put in the title, to just bait readers?

I hope not. I'm fine with her reasonings actually but I don't agree with her choice. Imagine you are in a relationship and suddenly you are diagnosed with cancer (or some serious health problem). Your partner has all the rights to just say "I don't want to deal with your problems" and peace out. After a year of treatment and sufferings the medics finally says you're a free of "it". What do you do? Do you take your partner dumping you in your time of need as a life lesson? Or do you wait with open arms for her/he to come back? Maybe even worse, you go after her/he?

Author wants to do a lot of things but still uses "dollar" as currency in his fantasy world. Figures. Even the generic "copper, silver and gold coins" would be better than just naming it "dollar". It's such a modern term, from one side of the world, coin at least is universal.

His first time while awake and conscious and author skips it over. You truly don't care about Leo, right author?

I would agree with you if was any other topic and not about being a merchant. To be a successful merchant you need to be above common sense, to use other people common sense in your favor, you need to be shrewd, read other people and "scam" them. Anyone can calculate and realize buying low and selling high is good business. But to be successful you need more than that. So I refuse to believe his father (or teachers) never taught him how not to be scammed and how to scam others for profit (which would require knowing common sense).

Hey author why are trying to make us readers hate these gangsters for r@ping these girls and portraying them as evil but not doing the same for Sarah (and all the other women) that r@pes Leo every day? Should you not portray them as evil too?

Now r@pe is wrong. But when Leo is being r@ped is right? I find it funny that now author tries to portray r@pe as bad (as it should be), that we should hate the gangster and feel bad for the girls after having Leo be r@ped every day. For me Sarah is at same level of these gangsters, utterly trash garbage human beings.

Thanks for the chapter! I don't like these insta buys from the system. In a 1v1 mortal fight of equals the richest would always win because he can just spam buy item from the system. Even a weak opponent could overwhelm a stronger opponent just by spamming itens. The rich would always win. Doesn't seem that fair TBH

Worse yet. What was the MC"s plan of action exactly? Sure he tanked one spell, but then what? He would die or get incapacitated, the girl would still be 1v3 and probably lose because MC helped with nothing, she would get abused and probably killed, then the MC next if he already didn't die. Without plotarmor the MC did nothing, sacrificed himself in vain. One line of dialogue could've changed this BS of plot, when his mom gave him the amulet she said something like "this will help you in your time of need" or "this will save you one time". Because then the MC knew the amulet could do anything and his sacrifice would help the girl. The MC not knowing about the plotarmor only made this choice of sacriface as utter nonsense and stupidity because HE DIDN'T HELP AT ALL! Why not try to go around the guys and ambush them from behind? Taking one guy from the fight was already enough help for the girl to possibly win 2v1. I'm pretty sure a hit to the head would knock out these guys.

If a lvl 2 spell wasn't going to kill her why did the MC tank it then? Why not ambush the guys from behind, idk, hit them in the head with a pipe or something. Because what was the MC plan after getting killed or incapacitated after getting hit by the spell? He would tank one hit and the girl would be defeated anyway and then r@ped. What the MC did was useless and stupid.

But she would not die. The author already said the power of a lvl 2 magic won't kill. The MC didn't need to "sacrifice" himself. Their objective was to r@pe her, the MC could've waited until they are closing to abusing her and them ambushed them from behind. She would still get hurt from the spell, maybe a few broken bones. But MC's sacrifice was useless, and for a person he only met for 2 days, just because she is a beautiful girl?

Get system that makes him stronger just by consuming bodies (not even needing to fight). Decide to leave perfect place to farm just after getting a little stronger. Author said because he already spent 11 years so he wanted to leave. But after 11 years would it really hurt to wait one more week? He could test more of the system, kill monsters and get a bit stronger. Another thing, MC was born a a cripple in a cultivation world. It was already explained he wanted strength to do whatever, he even read all the books and did experiments just to have a chance in getting stronger. And then, after 16 years waiting, after getting abandoned and put in a hit list, he FINALLY gets his chance to get stronger. What do you think would happen author? Would he really go back to a city or would he excitedly start killing every monsters he sees just to finally get a little bit stronger. It doesn't matter how smart, calm or mature a person can be, I would bet they would go the latter choice guarantee, at least for the first day or week.

Imagine if the MC actually hunted monsters. By the second year he would be already stronger than he is now after 5 years running away. The mana potions and battle skills, anything was possible. Shame really.

I just read the next chapter. The MC wasted 5 years, 5 years!!! He wasted it and there nothing you can say that will change it. I feel like a broken record because I'm gonna repeat myself for the third time: if the MC hunted weak monsters (like the wolf's or lizards that gave 200-300 pts), after 5 years killing ONLY ONE PER DAY, I repeat, ONE WEAK MONSTER PER DAY would give him a total 365k! That's only ONE, a single monster per day. After only ONE year in the forest you showed him destroying a den with a dozen wolf's that gave 500 pts each and an alpha that gave him 3k alone. That's was only after one year in the forest. What did the MC do in the other 4 years? Seriously? So a wolf was giving him 500 pts instead of 200 like back in the starter village, killing one monster per day would give him 912k after 5 years. But what about the alpha wolf that the MC easily killed? After only one year the MC could easily kill an Alpha Wolf. What if he hunted one monster at this stage for 4 years everyday? That would be almost 4.4 millions!!! Of course I don't expect him to hunt an alpha or equal every day, but once per week for 5 years would be already 180k + 912k for hunting one weak monster per day. Let's not forget the most important thing: MC would grow in strength, hunt more powerful beasts, get more points, buy skills and potions, train and get stronger, hunt more powerful enemies..repeat it for 5 years = Massive profit. But NO, author you made the MC waste 5 years doing nothing only for you to introduce some cheap boring system companion only as a plot tool to awaken his berserk skill and get him stronger in a single day. It feels super cheap, and makes me think you treat us readers as stupid or something. Why not just say he actually got stronger after 5 years and not only because of some plot skill? Thousands of ways to make the MC stronger and you chose the laziest and lamest way: Even though he could kill and get stronger he only ran and hid from monsters, wasting years doing nothing. But then how will the MC be strong? Simple, make a new character that seemingly died in less than a day to awaken MC's power. And maybe worse of all, the MC chose to be in this forest doing nothing for a useless objective, he could go in any other place or stayed with the girls. And would make more sense for him to get the berserk skill when one of them was in danger. Again, the worse time skip I ever saw in more than 6 years reading novels (not counting mangas). Congratulations author.

Didn't the mana potion cost only 200k or 300k? How come he still hasn't brought it yet? A normal wolf would give him 200 battle points. If he killed one wolf or equal monster per day, that would give in total 73k a year. That's only one easy monster per day. 2 years in and MC was already cleaning entire dens and killing Bosses that gave him thousands of points. But sure let's say he went easy for 5 years and only killed one easy monster per day, after 5 years that would be still 365k battle points. So yeah, I hope he's swimming in battle points after 5 years, like in the 8 or 9 digits minimum.

Didn't you read his comment? He said he gives plenty of chances to a novel by reading more than 30 chapters. This is quite common because a lot of times the beginning of a novel, well, sucks. In his opinion the MC is super flawed with no good qualities, hence his comment. I read novels that only got good after chapter 50, some by chapter 100 had improved. This one Idk, I'm really not feeling the MC, which is one the biggest part of a novel, so is very important. It's hard to keep reading, and all the "I will be quiet and not tell him" annoys me to no end.

Now the sister not only had enough energy to heal the orc kid she had enough energy to use the gun again?

By their name. A nanny can do all those things but I would not call them mom.