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YoraeDragon1mthCommentedIsn't he immune to negative effects?
However, this power had negative effects, so Ethan had only used it once before to silence someone.- YoraeDragon1mthCommented
You explain a lot how, even though he is strong, he can still be stoped by Dumbledore and other powerful wizards. Even Merlin has said that even though he is strong by today standards, he is still pretty weak considering other things you have alluded to, like Merlin, Morgana/Death, and maybe others... In previous years, he was careful, methodic, and dealt with possible problems smartly. He even let Nick go because he lost an arm and didn't have a choice, but was decisive to do it to protect himself. Now, he is strong enough to deal with Nick, but doesn't, not because a good reason, but because "he can do it at any time, so let's give him a chance to leave me alone". This goes a lot against his previous way of thinking. And yes, it's been 3 years for him, and some change is expected, but to me it just seems like a forced way to keep Nick a variable in the story. Also, he should check on Hermione. In a world with magic that can take your free will he just accepted her "betrayal" without checking anything. Nick with what he did just personality-killed her, and he is not even gonna check why this extreme change in her? She was one of his best friends! TLDR, the current situation with Nick being left as is, and not checking on what happened between Nick and Hermione seems to me like a forced way to make drama
Please tell me in comment so I will try to tone down MC arrogant personality, though I believe it not arrogant but more like he is speaking because he is really that strong. But still please tell me in teh comment section. - YoraeDragon1mthCommented
It is because of the disonance with the MC from before and after timeskip. He is like another person in most aspects. Although the change is expected, since it has been 3 years for him, this dissonance is extremelly notable for reader, since we have not seen does 3 years. Before he was vigilant, careful, powerful for his age, but not arrogant. Now he is careless, arrogant, and underestimates everyone. As a matter of fact, I have been getting "young master" vibes from him, he only needs to say something like "courting death"...
Got to say that the story fall back a lot this week, but maybe story is going slow right now, can't do anything evey time at the start of a new year I gotta at least show a little of of school life. - YoraeDragon1mthCommented
His arrogance should be controlled. He is doing stupid things because he has some power (yes, some. He mastered presence and space, but if Dumbledore is "so powerful" he can ignore the law of presence, then he is still weak and easily killable)
What do you thing is the main theme of this year ? - YoraeDragon1mthCommented
This is stupid, all the way. Not only did they try to kill him, but also took his arm, and now since he "is powerful" he just goes "I will let you live". This is just to give Hermione a chance to redeem herself to return to the harem. For him to let her live is comprehensible, since she was a friend and although she betrayed him he may still have some feelings and letting her live may count as "we are even", but letting Nick/Harry live is stupid AF. In a world of magic where everything is possible, he is just inviting them to have another go at him, anyone can die in the right circumstances and he is just raising "arrogant master" death flags, and this time he may deserve them.
'Is this even possible to change Houses? At first, when he saw Hermione he was surprised but he didn't care considering he didn't plan to deal with that girl anymore. He won't attack her or Nick. That was his last line when he decided to not act on them becuase of any previous grimaces but that only extends to the past actions. Not the future actions, if any one of them acts against him or his friends, then he will kill them both. - YoraeDragon1mthCommentedSeverus had tried to study this new subject and unfortunately suffered the loss of his mark as a result. Rather than give him a new one as he asked I instead branded the mark upon an item that he could hide from the old man unlike the mark. This allowed him to serve even better at spying on the foolish headmaster as well as the brat. Still the brat was growing more and more troublesome the longer he was left alone and needed to be slowed down before I can no longer easily dispatch him.-
- YoraeDragon2mthCommentedCh 42 37: Teen Titans Unite
- YoraeDragon2mthCommented"╰(▔∀▔)╯" Cass smiled, the picture of innocence. 'Cass, yes! Besides, Jason ruined my splash zone seats. I demand compensation! Letting Mr. Barkeep see me in a cheerleader outfit is a good start, at the very least.'
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Now he also needs the Wonder Woman xD
Named by Eero, 'The Wonder Garden and Wonder Palace.' - YoraeDragon2mthCommentedAllen led the group, not noticing that Sadako remained staring at him until he disappeared.
- YoraeDragon2mthReplied to Daoist_CloudySkyBecause they are NEO Marine, Fujitora, Ryokugyu and NEO Marine's Admiral Dragon.
- YoraeDragon2mthCommentedHe had a faint feeling that the storm was about to come.
- YoraeDragon2mthCommentedAkainu and Aokiji never imagined that things would turn out like this. They had been at odds for so long, contending for the position of Fleet Admiral, only for Kizaru, the slacker, to take advantage of the situation.
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Everyone: Let's go get Pluton! The system: One free Pluton!
[Obtained: Ancient weapon Pluton.] - YoraeDragon2mthCommented
Pa Kent right now...
The audience they had likely didn't help things. Kara's whole family was watching her get utterly ravished in such a tender and lewd manner! Clark looked disgruntled but he couldn't openly disagree with anything Sean was doing (it was appropriately chaste and innocent to anyone but Kara at the moment). Lois and Ma both smirked at the scene. Pa just chuckled and shook his head. - YoraeDragon2mthCommentedINTERLUDE 3: Barbara Finally Gets Some (18+)
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So he is going to lose and nearly die every fight...
Beside him, Franky is holding a comic [Genos Biography] in his hand. - YoraeDragon2mthReplied to Hziro"Take me!"
- YoraeDragon2mthReplied to MaulannLost? Zoro? That was preposterous!