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Unowho1

Unowho1

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  • Unowho1
    Unowho11yr
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    㖄䝣䑠䜳䭴䡞䀀㜅䣝䛓 - The words are linked and obscures the intent of you description.

    But whatever Eren had done now was enough for him to initiate his next set of plans. Even without the beast manifestation, he was confident in tackling most problems that might come in his way.
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    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho11yr
    Commented

    Please get a proof reader. Your words are linked and it is confusing.

    Eren's legs that had blue tongues of lightning surrounding them now had a few streams of purple lightning mixed. In short, Eren's visage had changed drastically after executing the dummy Beast contract spell.
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    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
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    What happened with the Releases?

    Ch 165 Few weeks?
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    I am the young master
    Eastern · Amiro0o
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    His train of thought eludes me?

    Ch 18 Father's disguise
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    The Legendary Pseudo-villain
    Sci-fi · cherlyswan
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    Trying to hard to doto much.

    Ch 123 Aftermath
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    Prime Originator
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    Story is all over the place.

    Ch 4 Session
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    Vengeance of the Fallen Magus
    Fantasy · Sach_Official
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    I like the story and pacing, but the release of 1 chapter a day is losing me. At this rate it will take 2 or more years to see the completion of the story. I like but will be putting it down for at least a year so that i can binge read it then. Thank you for the teaser.

    Ch 57 Amiable smile
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    I am the young master
    Eastern · Amiro0o
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    I dont get why the MC does what he does The timeline is a mess as well

    Ch 48 Auction Part 2
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    While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho12yr
    Commented

    Confusing tranlation.

    Ch 4 Guide Him or Kill Him
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    Izuka
    Fantasy · Anotoki
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  • Unowho1
    Unowho13yr
    Commented

    "amnesia" is the right word to use in this situation and not "anemia".

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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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