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  • bigD24
    bigD241yr
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    Oh, so the society has devolved, and men have become animals

    They either endured with an indomitable spirit and heart of steel or gave in to their inner demons and f*cked the ground, f*cked the trees, or f*cked with their hands.
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • bigD24
    bigD241yr
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    Them be truths

    "People weren't born equal. If you're ugly, then just suck it up. I don't feel good either, but it is what it is," Captain Rhys grumbled and said, "I will request for a short break later. So we can all take that chance to find a bush to beat our meat and release some steam."
    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • bigD24
    bigD241yr
    Posted

    Its good, the only thing is slow development and too many verbose descriptions of things. It would be good if arthur can review and take out the unnecessary parts, the size of this novel should be 1/3 of its current chapters, then build upon the world more.

    altalt
    I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible
    Eastern · Half a clear breeze
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  • bigD24
    bigD242yr
    Replied to MR_UNKNOWN_6332

    I wish it was avaialable somewhere other than webnovel

    Ch 56 Winter Forest
    altalt
    The Place Where Everything Begins
    Fantasy · NotStupidReader
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  • bigD24
    bigD242yr
    Replied to NotStupidReader

    Great job, please build the world and paint our imaginations author-sama.

    altalt
    The Place Where Everything Begins
    Fantasy · NotStupidReader
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  • bigD24
    bigD242yr
    Commented

    Don't think anything exciting will occur like him killing 5 humans?

    Ch 55 We Are Fucking Dead
    altalt
    The Place Where Everything Begins
    Fantasy · NotStupidReader
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  • bigD24
    bigD242yr
    Posted

    Quite an interesting uptake with an engagement going up past chapter 25, I do still tend to skip read the fight scenes as we know the end result, but still, can't wait beyond the tutorial arch, as I believe the world-building will define the critical factors of success.

    altalt
    The Place Where Everything Begins
    Fantasy · NotStupidReader
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