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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
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    This was the last straw for me, best of wishes and luck for the rest of the novel.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: “The Path Unchosen”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    I never understood the point of writing this like that instead of using that information in the novel you're ✍.

    Ch 4 The opening Position- Wandlore & Politics
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    Harry Potter- Yeager's Rewrite [Dropped]
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Replied to Glace

    As I told you last time, if you are in a hurry don't post it, work on it and post it only when its perfectly done or else this will hurt the quality of your novel...But if you don't care about your work then do what you want.

    Ch 11 More Then One?
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    Yu-Gi-Oh GX! Aim For The Pros!
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
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    Bending* not magic.

    It was still broad daylight outside, so after talking to the warrior, I headed to the shore. For several weeks now, I've been focused on dedicating time and attention to meditations. I haven't stopped meditating since I got out of prison. The way I escaped, simply making the stone part and then close behind me to prevent the Fire Nation from getting any information about how I escaped, has at least confirmed part of my hypothesis about the potential to master other elements besides my own, without being the avatar. And since I managed to master earth magic, though it was harder than with water, it means I can master the remaining elements. Fire and air are left. And for quite some time now, I've been dedicating at least three hours a day to meditations with fire, focusing on the fire element as I previously did with earth or water. I haven't had any success yet, but it took a lot of time with Earth too.
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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    Water Magic ?

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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    The Dumbledore obssession trope to trying to find conspiration has always been cringe but I understand why its used.

    "Yew," he eventually says to Fawkes, who's asleep and not listening at all. "Perhaps this is the omen I was afraid to find."
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    The strange hufflepuff (HP/FMAB)
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Replied to TheDeath_Angel

    Yeah my bad, I actually got it wrong.

    Late Fall, 1001 A.D. Unknown Continent
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    TVD: The Seventh Original
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    Europe ?

    Late Fall, 1001 A.D. Unknown Continent
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    TVD: The Seventh Original
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    I don't like the fact that he's being treated like a fn 12 year old when he's actually like 30...This is just wierd to be honnest.

    Ch 81 Chapter 81: A difficult decision
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    Harry Potter: Another Chance
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    Take your time to write your stuff, if you don't have time and you're thinking of releasing something half done just don't do it and wait for the right time to post your chapter instead. Not saying it was bad but if you had to rush it then its not worth for the quality of the novel to suffer a hit.

    Ch 9 Missing And New Events! Part 2
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    Yu-Gi-Oh GX! Aim For The Pros!
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    I feel like you over exagerated the character a bit too much.

    Ch 4 Graduation Part 1
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    Naruto : Sadistic Devil
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented
    She immediately left and began meditating. Cedric's smile changed into a tired expression as he thought, 'Now not only do I have to spend money for Orion's Rhyhorn's food, but I also have to buy one Pokemon for Emma. Since when did being an instructor in the gym become such a costly affair?'
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    Nice character dev chapter !

    Ch 7 Unrealistic Rumors and Strange Dreams.
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    Yu-Gi-Oh GX! Aim For The Pros!
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    Kanazaki**

    Yūki and Shō exchanged glances and then sighed simultaneously at Maeda's negative attitude. Although they had already become accustomed to this attitude over the past two weeks, it was still somewhat uncomfortable to hear the chubby boy's disdain for ending up in Red Osiris. Or at least, it was until Maeda's recent information had firmly settled in their heads. Seconds later, they were finally able to share their thoughts about student Kanazaky.
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    Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Ryuto's Path! (Dropped)
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    C'mon bro be believable at least...

    Harley cut in, "Nah, that's cap. He's not my type but there's no denying Bats is sexy as Hell."
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    Gotham's Dead End Bar
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Commented

    No explanation on the wand ? He just gave it like without giving him explanation on the pros and cons of it...You can't do the work half assed bro.

    Ch 3 Chapter-3: Diagon Alley
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    HP: Ronan's Journey
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen3mth
    Replied to Carlos_Balbizan

    You are generous...because this is actually trash

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    Reincarnated in TO/TVD
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen4mth
    Replied to WaitWhoWhat

    That's not how it works unfortunatly...

    Ch 2 Knight In Shining Armour
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    TVD/TO: The Original Husband
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen4mth
    Commented

    I'm not a fan of sharing every secret under his arsenal...

     Harper: I created an extremely powerful artifact for vampires, a tool that can allow them to age their bodies very quickly and make them more powerful. I didn't do it for the sake of our species, just for my dietary needs.
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    Tvd /The Originals : Harper Freed
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  • PatriarchZigen
    PatriarchZigen4mth
    Commented

    Love the story but lot of contradictions like this one.

    Damon had fully given in to his vampire nature just like Harper, he loved killing and so did Harper except he didn't attack innocents.
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    Tvd /The Originals : Harper Freed
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