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Soafa3dCommentedI still think he should tell Vesemir about his system, and how it gives him rewards
Pushing those thoughts aside for later, Wayne inventoried his spoils. The Hearthstone, Detonating Talismans, Destiny Coin, Intermediate Healing Potion, and Skeleton Summoning Scroll – these five held the most immediate utility and found their way into his enchanted pouch. The remaining items, like throwing knives from various worlds and exotic foodstuffs, were relegated to a locked iron chest within the room. Whether for future use or mere keepsakes, they weren't priorities at the moment. With a satisfied sigh, Wayne finished organizing his haul.- Soafa3dCommented
Dont tell me he's going to have Leonard raise a rabbit before killing it? :(
Looking at the two rabbits he had brought, Connor stood up, grabbing them by their ears and placing them in a cage, awaiting Leonard's arrival. - Soafa3dCommented
I can't see why dancers would just stan outside on the streets, I'm guessing you meant prostitutes?
Late at night, an obscure street in Kabukicho. Under the street lamps, a scattering of dancers stood, either hugging themselves and kicking their heels, or sizing up passersby while smoking, waiting for business. Parties of young people, laughing and chatting, would pass them by, engrossed in discussions about the latest "braindance" films, amazed by the feats of "Lizzy's" girls, paying no attention to the gazes of street dancers. - Soafa4dReplied to GuardianofNightNyx
Alright, so translator is breaking immersion by not translating correctly
Tang Yu and Kerry used to hang out quite often. He knew Kerry was very open-minded and couldn't stop thinking about his big brother Johnny. With this in mind, he did wonder about the nature of Kerry's relationship with Michiko Arasaka—perhaps it was similarly open? - Soafa4dCommented
Seems a bit extreme, he could just arrest bradley
Meanwhile Axel had returned to his Pelicans and departed the ONI base. He knew they were under orders from Admiral Parangosky but Lieutenant Commander Bradley constantly ignored rank and just tried to carry out his orders. If he wanted to, he could have continued to argue with him, but he didn't want the situation to turn into something else, because if he did have a gunfight with the Lieutenant Commander Bradley, then he would have probably been called for treason and hunted down. - Soafa4dCommented
Author, why dont you ever fix all these naming issues? I love this story so it's sad to see how you constantly break the immersion with such a easily fixed problem
Tang Yu and Kerry used to hang out quite often. He knew Kerry was very open-minded and couldn't stop thinking about his big brother Johnny. With this in mind, he did wonder about the nature of Kerry's relationship with Michiko Arasaka—perhaps it was similarly open? - Soafa5dCommented
Not the Emperor
Saburo once played rock before altering his demeanor upon returning to Arasaka. - Soafa5dCommented
Dude, the Emperor is not trapped in Kyoto. You really need to get better at names
Saburo Arasaka was somewhat trapped in Kyoto, waiting for his opportunity. - Soafa5dCommented
it was the maelstrom, not the voodo boys
Kate had seen the operation report; it mainly stated that the Voodoo Boys had premeditated a trade to acquire the military-grade Sandevistan cyberware. - Soafa5dCommented
This paragraf makes no sense
"Hey, I'm going to work in those places where the birds don't shit. Sometimes I also think, can't we take a year off? Anyway, save a little. If you usually rely on hunting and fishing, the money is not enough. Why? Have to run out every year and suffer from that bird?" - Soafa6dCommented
No one would believe he just happened to come across a Vault, it's obvious he knew it was there. How would he explain his knowledge of the Vaults existence and location?
Axel clarified, "We came across a Forerunner Vault that held a map pointing to another colony called Arcadia. However, as we were leaving, the Covenant attacked us; we believe they had tracked our Pelicans. We're not sure if they were aware of the location of the Vault before but now, they are, so I intend to go to Arcadia soon and uncover why the map pointed us there." - Soafa7dCommentedCh 250 Chapter LXXI: Valerica Volkihar
- Soafa7dCommentedCh 51 Chapter 51: Training or Hell?
- Soafa7dCommentedCh 131 Chapter 130
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Only males lift their leg, females just crouch
The room was silent except for the soft ticking of her claws on the stone floor until she halted in front of another display case. With no further ado, she lifted her leg and relieved herself. - Soafa8dCommented
Ah come on! Kill Yorinobu!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Soafa10dReplied to BlackNilton
I don't want to give you my email, I'd rather just critize stuff.
"I'll be here for you in your toughest moments, so you don't need to be afraid. As I said earlier, I'll hold your hand and we'll walk together."