I've seen size measured in milk tea and now years, what a crazy place China must be.

Are all these authors given a template they have to stick to to publish on here? Seriously, is an original thought that hard to come by these days?

How do people still get this wrong? That 10% thing is about potential not 10% active. Like imagine buying a $10k gaming rig and then using it to play the minesweeper game that comes with windows. The whole thing is being used but nowhere near it's full potential. Whether it's true or not, at least get it right ffs.

When exactly did milk tea become a unit of measurement?

Is this guy intentionally being written as a moron or is the author this stupid? This isn't the first time this kind of stupidity has happened. It was the same with the pregnant fish, basic math showed that it was an incredible profit but the author explained it as if somehow it wasn't a very good deal.

Hey author are you sure she was an artist? Doesn't seem to know of charcoal or charcoal sticks, makes basic errors like shading before getting proportions right, never heard of bread as an eraser...

You know pencil 'lead' has to be dried in ovens then fired at high temps for like 10 hours. That's a pretty amazing and magical window sill that did all that over night.

Mc is getting more and more cringey each chapter.

What was she trying to light it with, water? XD

Congratulations, you just got those kids killed.

"Just the 3 of us" she really doesn't like her daughter huh.

What's the point of him even leveling up anymore? Just this puts him so far ahead in stats that no player could catch up even if he never levels again.

Can't we have a novel where they say "yes you're right, she died to their scheme and now I'm here. Come, lets get revenge!"

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

No not all, the tense or grammar isn't the issue, it's completely the wrong words or really awkward wording. Like "braincase" no english speaker would ever, in any situation, call their head their braincase. Or "to fight the excruciation" is just plain wrong. I assume you meant "to fight the excruciating pain", but as I said that's not a tense or grammar issue it's an issue with the words simply being wrong/awkward. Which is why I said these are the kind of things you'd get from google translate, they're understandable but wrong.

I don't mean to come off sounding harsh but there's just so much. For instance just in the first few sentences you describe the sun as "climbing on it's apex", say the river "flew", and describe the character as "clenching his braincase to fight the excruciation". Although it's obvious what you meant it's just not really english. It's like the english you'd get from google translate, it's understandable but wrong.

Actually vomitted in my mouth a bit reading this.

Yes it is. Although referring to it as 'muscle' memory is wrong, the phenomenon itself is real. It refers to the strengthening of neural pathways in the brain. As pathways are used more often they get stronger and allow signals to be sent a lot faster. Eventually getting quick enough to make actions seem almost unconscious.

Probably got in through a "back door".

It starts off with mentioning that the ml raped her because he got mad at her, not the villain the ml. Seems the author thinks rape is how you should punish women if you're mad at them.