i have a hard time understanding mc, he's a good guy most of the time but when it comes to lust i don't know what to think, i understand it's because of his past and all that but it seems like there's more lust than feelings for his girls and i say this because of the few times his feelings are mentioned. his thoughts almost always go towards lust, what i want to know is he going to be more consumed by lust or not? very good story!

the brand does that? personally I don't like them to be influenced by something to change but to do it because they want to and that it is their conscious decision without external influence.

when someone dies of that race hoopa will take their souls and give them a new life in the disformity or what will he do?

I have a question, was his body altered from his original body to toji's or was the body created from scratch? I don't know if you know what I mean, I ask because if it's the former in a sense the chemistry in his brain as well as toji's memory or instincts are there that's why he doesn't feel hesitation or am I thinking too much haha.

Will you continue it someday?

he can also tell a partial truth, that there are times when he sleeps he receives knowledge from other beings is not a lie plus it would allow him to be much freer to train his powers and batman gets a partner to train with and improve.

it would have been better if you showed the first meeting with every important villain, it feels like a waste not to do it. i like it a lot even though it's just starting so far the novel i'm most looking forward to reading.

now that you said all that I hope she has an encounter with the original gwen or a variant, it would be very very interesting.

they didn't suspect garaki? right after they left the hospital he is kidnapped and not only that but they also had information about his peculiarity, it makes you wonder where they got it from? in general the kidnapping scene is fine but not perfect the police should have investigated the sounds of gunshots but they were hidden for an hour without the police or a hero appearing, you should have specified the area where it happens for example it is unpopulated, no heroes are circulating, it is far away from people etc.

if you have time you could edit it, put in the title of the chapter that it was edited and give a little explanation in the next chapter.

I saw it in the original language, I hadn't thought about the dubbing.

what was the mc's appearance like? I forgot.

when sasuke was a child he called him nii-san not by his first name

this point is one where many readers don't fully understand, the body affects the mind whether it be thoughts or emotions all because of the chemistry that is produced in the brain as a child so it is normal for him to be reckless, for his thoughts to leak out to others either verbally or by changes he doesn't notice in his face, to be controlled by emotions and therefore show immature behavior no matter what mental age he has had unless he has had some training to control himself in his past life. I personally like a mix of both, showing his thoughts and his immature side as he changes throughout the novel, seeing a child being totally logical and controlled is boring.

in the future you could make an auxiliary chapter showing the information of the mc as well as his belongings (weapons, clothes, armor etc) as well as images of his appearance of the mc and his belongings? if possible only. so far i really like the novel, whenever there is a naruto fic they always give everything to make them op and go from fight to fight, this one i like a lot because of the rhythm, showing how is his life and the interactions with the others.

almost all the female members and some male members towards the end of shippuden, i think it was mentioned in some chapters that hinata had potential but she was too nice and shy, plus she is one of my favorite characters. i could choose rock lee or neji but i would like to see a female member who is described as a powerful person. (traslater)

Personally I liked it better when Tanya could detect when Anya was reading her mind, although this isn't bad either.

You used the information from the novel for the following sequences? it's already over 500 chapters long so there must be a lot of information that you didn't have before about this Pathways and Demoness Sect. welcome back and I wish you luck so that something like this doesn't happen again.

se agradecen las imagenes y muy buen capitulo!!

raven tiene que quedar con el, siempre fue mi personaje femenino favorito en dc, la historia me encanta, ya me gustaba la anterior y en esta se nota la mejora en el mc mas que nada, en el anterior simplemente fue con ellas sin mucha resistencia y era muy complaciente con ellas. espero mucho las interacciones con la liga y espero que no los termines retratando como unos idiotas, y por ultimo la forma en que corrompe es mejor que la anterior, realmente no me gusto que pasara a ser su mascota ahora esta mejor