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Fresh_Linens

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Ellipsis is my favorite grammatical punctuation mark...

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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
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    I think there is to much focus on what is to be and not enough focus on the now.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Ten years Events
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    Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    This seems very forced. Ill keep reading but i hope it improves

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Edward Baratheon
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    Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
    TV · GNaNA
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Replied to Markushnia

    Christmas and Vatican are unreleated. Its like saying 1+1 = 1. Christmas is a commercialized holiday with roots in paganism, judaism and other religions as a winter solstice celebration. Christianity being one of those religions.

    "A happy Yuletide to you, Mr. West." said the man as he strolled to the group with a smile on his face. Jacob Greengrass was a tall man with black hair and blue eyes; he had traditional aristocratic features with an angular face and a strong jawline.
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    I thought his plan was to not become popular or to stand out to much?

    Quinn eyed the letter and smiled, 'With this, I am one step closer to becoming the most influential student in Hogwarts.'
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    Britain’s Auror Academy??? Isnt the whole purpose of going through the school to meet the qualifications to join the Aurors? The apprenticeship i understand, but a seperate vocational school???

    Lia had finally graduated from Beauxbaton Academy Of Magic and was ready for the next stage of her life. It turned out that you could study beyond the seven years of education as seen in the series. After the initial seven, you could apprentice under a certified master, join a vocational school like Britain's Auror Academy, or you could end your education and join the workforce immediately.
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    Spell Check

    Garp left the Island just after a weak they arrived and Blaize hadn't seen him ever since. Finishing his daily One-punch man workout in the training ground, he panted a little while sweat covered his face.
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    Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
    Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    Yes because torture has always been the right answer and most satisfying solution to getting betrayed.

    Ch 105 Back to Alex
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    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    The Harem Stamp

    Description: A special tool that grants willing parties a sub-routine of the Supreme System. All parties branded via this tool will be tied to the system and will be unable to betray the owner to the core system.]
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    Darius Supreme
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for another great chapter

    Ch 105 Back to Alex
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    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens2yr
    Replied to romeotango148

    Thats not who this character is. If he did that it would be such a sharp left turn in the character that it would derail the entire story.

    Ch 105 Back to Alex
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    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    Lots of Ji Ning vibes. I thought he might go after some of the assassination style life he had in his last life. Daggers, Throwing weapons, archery, etc

    Ch 20 Cauldrons Exploding
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    The Legend of Min Hong
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    Crimsonbright Diagram Of The Nine Heavens????

    Ch 16 Rise!
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    The Legend of Min Hong
    Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Replied to Hateful_Fellow

    Can we get a chapter or doc with the ranks? i Keep forgetting them.

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    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Replied to Belg4r

    Contradicts was the wrong word to use. Loose ends is better. The character plans to do all these things but then there is a tangent and they are never mentioned again. Like DNA and the teacher, Warding class now warding book, etc. Plenty of things the main character plans for but are forgotten a few chapters later.

    Ch 88 Chapter 88: A Number Of Spells
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    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    Thank you!!!!!!!!!

    Ch 97 Charm Crafting 101
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    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    Im juat curious as to why the author contridicts themselves so much

    Ch 88 Chapter 88: A Number Of Spells
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    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    I have have a critique. The author continues to expound on Raven’s amazingness when he/she/they want to illustrate he has improved in one area of his cultivation or just to reiterate that progress. If possible I’d like to see some diversity of themes when it comes to Raven utilizing his abilities. Not just bragging but maybe just a simple “Raven makes it to the mountain utilizing the improved space-time laws.” Obviously the author will write it better but i hope i made my point.

    Ch 438 Smelting Trial 1.1
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    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Replied to Fresh_Linens

    One more please

    Ch 430 Aptitude Exams 1.4
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    Way of the Knights
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Commented

    Thanks

    Ch 430 Aptitude Exams 1.4
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    Way of the Knights
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  • Fresh_Linens
    Fresh_Linens3yr
    Replied to Fresh_Linens

    Please come back

    Ch 96 Going Home
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    Rebirth in a Magical World
    Book&Literature · Jmwells2003
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