And wth is Aegis doing when human future soldiers are being turned into dolls with no potential of advancing? Isn't the governer in contact with them?

Love your story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Sadly I have to put it on hold so I can binge read when I accumilate enough chapters!

The quality improved again. Thanx for the chapter!

Why did the translation drop so much? Its not different from mtl at this point!

What nonsense! Even the genin in Konoha know about his bloodline, and we are supposed to believe that Suna aren't aware of the genius kid who decimated the other villages in the Chuunin exam? Lousy spy.

Dropped

Not a single chinese garbage name indeed. Bravo sir. It really does not feel like reading a translated book.

Did the author post his sticky notes by mistake? Rather than a story, this reads more like a diary of what he was gonna include in his fanfic!

The story is not bad. Actually compared to the rubbish fanfic on this site it's quite good, but unfortunately it's suffering from the upload speed. Many chapters are just monologues, rehash from the original book, alternative pov, OC peeping on the main cast, smut...etc. There's nothing wrong with that, and it can be quite entertaining to read normally, BUT when you wait a whole week only to get a single chapter filled with that stuff, it can be quite frustrating. My advice is to basically close cultivate, accumilate a decent amount of chapters, and then binge it one go. Unless you like getting blueballed, in which case you can go ahead and suffer.

You know, if the story wasn't good I wouldn't bother writing review. I will just drop it and carry on with my life. I'm just dissatisfied with the 4 year old baby killing Anbu who have been training their whole life. There is a tag named overpowered and then there is this baby hyuga saitama. You're not writing a satire or a comedy so I expected some kind of limit to her opness. Anyway you got the talent so I'm looking forward to your next work; and I will lower my expectations and keep reading this one to pass time! Good luck

Sigh, such a good story with a fascinating and interesting mc but the author had to ruin it with the op nonsense! Isnt the gentle fist and having the best byagukan in the universe enough? maybe add senjutsu and even the tenseigan in the future? But NO that wasn't enough for the author; she is now mastering all the elements, learning medicine and killing anbu from the other side of the village with lightning before the academy. Hints about copying other bloodlines... etc. Its so over the top that even kaguya wouldn't be able touch her in a few years. Where is the suspense?

Focus more on this. The story is good but upload speed is slow

F/m

Unfortunately this one failed to live up to its potential!

What Was Needed by Serenechaos. The MC is female but there is no romance or fluffy Bullshit. You can find it on AO3

Of course the story has its bad points too. Bizzef seems to be getting too strong too fast. The abilities he developed so far are too op and they are inching closer to breaking the limit of what a specialist could do. He has meta knowledge of how to develop his Nen but there is no mention of training the body. The secondary characters are not developed very well; I can't even remember how he met and recruited Node or if that was mentioned at all. And these are just off the top my head. Still the potential is there. So keep up the good work author-san. And kudos for the upload speed!

I have scoured the internet from the top to the bottom; and, despite HxH popularity, interesting characters, and vast intricate world, I only found a single HxH fanfic that could be considered good. This one has the potential to be the second. The MC is reborn as Bizzef, the pervert who was single handedly taking care of East Gordeau bureaucracy during the Chimera Ant invasion, you know, the guy who had an underground palace with a harem. At first, the author's choice seems weird and uninspiring. Bizzef in the original is an old short pervert with shifty face and squeaky voice; but when you carefully think about it, that choice is exactly what gives this fanfic the enormous potential I mentioned earlier. The upcoming Chimera Ant Crisis, the looming threat of Gyro, the unification of the Balsa islands and becoming the new V6, politics vs the Kakin Empire, the Dark Continent; so many interesting directions the story could take. If the author manages to take advantage of them, then not only can we witness the rise of an outstanding HxH fanfic but it may actually inspire a new wave of good HxH SI fanfics like Dreaming of Sunshine did for Naruto.

Inspiration from LOTM is good and all, it makes me want to read more, and there is nothing wrong with naming your magic system Path, but if you start inserting names like Medici then it stops being an inspiration and begins to seem more like a fanfiction! That takes away from your originality

It would have been better if there was some struggle, there's no growth without challenge u know. This way is interesting too though. I just hope the author wont ignore the ramifications of changing the plot. No hachi changes a lot in sabody. No luffy means no bounty. How will Nami join and respect luffy if he didn't help her... etc

If they spent a month relaxing in Ussop village then the Baratie and Alabasta would have turned into the deadland without the crew's help!