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    not sure about this one. overall premise is good. but the MC has the mental capability of an 8yr old. completely does not mesh. also, the premise of him being a world class taekwondo champion, yet his personality is so... cowardly. hoping this gets better. Also, you need a real translator, not whatever AI your currently utilizing.

    Ch 21 Look For Weapon
    The Adventurer System
    Games · Jigx
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