geez, this is starting to drive me nuts. it's a struggle to keep in mind that the mc is a guy with all the pronoun switching going on.

I know that's his real name but when it comes to stuff in game it's hard to keep track of whether you are talking about stuff in game or irl.

so why did the guys name change to Klaus? makes it hard to read

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

not too many chapters out so far, but with what it has I would have to say that it is a very promising book. keep up the good work author! looking forward to what you have in store for the story

All I can say is that the author is doing a good job so far. the book is easy to read and follow along. most new stories have issues with transitions but this one doesn't so keep up the good work!