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  • Altelco
    Altelco3mth
    Commented

    inched -> inches

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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Altelco
    Altelco4mth
    Commented

    *hopping

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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Altelco
    Altelco8mth
    Commented

    letting *me* turn into

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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Altelco
    Altelco1yr
    Replied to Cavblade

    pink fleshed if I recall

    "Thank you for accommodating us. We are Expedition Wrenched, a Nomadic Vessel in search of new technologies to share with the Innu people. It is an incredible pleasure to be here aboard Terminus, home to so many new and incredible sights." The lead Innu woman greeted him, clearly filming her arrival for a later social media post.
    Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
    Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
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  • Altelco
    Altelco1yr
    Posted

    I really enjoyed reading this segment. It kept me reading and wanting more, occasionally bursting out in laughter. There are definitly a few spelling mistakes that can be corrected. I will most certanly come back and read it again.

    Mage And Wolf
    Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
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  • Altelco
    Altelco1yr
    Commented

    everythung is gone .. Then ning asks if he wants the house taken with as well.

    Ch 746 Empty Rooms
    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    Some stars were coming towards or Some stars were moving towards moving and coming in this sentence are the same thing.

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    urther -> other?

    Each group would then be assigned to a certain location, with urther objectives that needed to be completed while they were at the location.
    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    They took turned -> They took turns

    They took turned for night watch duty. The next morning, all four of them rode to the east, towards the place where Klea's boat was anchored. Emery could just use the [Spatial Gate], but Thrax insisted he had to see what was left of the battlefield.
    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    do you mean "The time dilation is about 1 hour to the 6 hours in the outside world

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    then than. --> then that means

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    The next was -> The nest was

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    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 653 Anodyne Cybernetics
    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 52 14 Days and 14 Nights (1)
    The Hunter's Guide to Monsters
    Games · Jin_Daoran
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 52 14 Days and 14 Nights (1)
    The Hunter's Guide to Monsters
    Games · Jin_Daoran
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 52 14 Days and 14 Nights (1)
    The Hunter's Guide to Monsters
    Games · Jin_Daoran
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    repeat paragraghs at the end?

    Ch 49 Interlude: Rashid
    The Hunter's Guide to Monsters
    Games · Jin_Daoran
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    here -> hear

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    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Posted

    Very well done. Enjoyed the book immensely. The author put a lot of work into it. Kinda sad and happy to see that it is now complete. Would highly recommend as something to read.

    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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  • Altelco
    Altelco2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 Inmate 777
    Phoenix Phire
    Games · BotwaCazador
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