just because someone is good at being stealthy doesn't mean they are an assassin, but just about every class in any game requires stealth for one reason or another.so him being a warrior type is fine and if you want to incorporate more stealth to zeyu make him have abilities tied to shadow.

my condolences this is an awesome story

TFTC. I think an interesting twist would be if old Kai showed up and got in the way somehow, but I am curious when radditz learned the spirit bomb

thanks for the chapter, but raditz fear seems a little forced. super buu or kid buu without the grand Supreme Kai has no access to God ki and even if he did by separating from the grand Supreme Kai and good but he just made himself target practice for goku's spirit bomb and if raditr learns it from watching goku then for him to, because like it was stated by raditz earlier in the series the spirit bomb is the perfect counter to kid buu cause he is pure evil and that is what the spirit bomb destroys

thanks for the chapter. so you know by making it so he has Yamamoto's abilities he instant becomes op cause he was basically handed a nuclear warhead that has multiple uses and that is still without using all the bankai abilities. the ideas that he should have gotten his bankai latter with senjutsu is good because as far as I know no one in naruto can survive the heat of the sun and that is what Yamamoto's shikai is supposed to be as hot as.

it is no problem it was just a shock to see that it had caught up and you are doing a absolutely awesome job in crafting the story I am curious how your going to do the doctor ichigaki fight with genkai not being in the tournament.

great chapter, and it has caught up with your patreon as well.

there is so much skipped it ruins the the flow of the story

I hope she starts feeling better. you take the time you need for family. This is a great story that I am sure is only going to get better.[img=recommend]

great story wish there was more chapters though.

iw I'll say yes cause this was a great story that hooked me in in but I don't have the budget to subscribe

thanks for the chapter and it is fine do what you need to to make sure you don't over stress and you are happy with what you put out for the story.

pretty good chapter and story weaving. I will point out though it is not the jotei 13 it is the gotei 13

multivariate would be better cause it allows for more aspects to be incorporated in to houryu's strength while also giving more possible people to have some connection to his life force before he messes agares up, and not doing the massive evolve thing that some do when it comes to mythical animals like dragons and pheonixs is a smart way to go so props for that it allows a depth to Sylvia's character for her to have a slow growth with houryu as he heals from the trauma of his mom and sisters murders.

great chapter

thanks for the great chapter

thanks for the chapter but I am curious how Adrian passed his archdemon trial cause the chapter before aetheros 1 he just used his first answer and got it wrong so was being shown the third scene to figure out the meaning of life

ok I am missing something major between the last two chapters. but this was a really god chapter.

true but it is almost 12 hours later and still a repeated chapter

ok th rehash previous chapters was getting annoying with how much re hashing was going on but this is just a copy and paste of the previous chapter.