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Grimaced1yrCommentedPretty sure the "chewing sounds" was the door from his senior brother.
"There's something wrong with this Xu Qing. There's something wrong with him!!"- Grimaced1yrCommented
"That's great! I'm going to start growing mold if I stay here."
"That's great! I'm going start growing mold if I stay here." - Grimaced1yrCommented
originally lifeless *eyes* were burning with anger.
Zhu Hongda really felt like his lungs were going to explode from anger when he looked at the b*tch in front of him. His originally lifeless now were now burning with anger. - Grimaced1yrCommented
bought-->brought
Northbridge Hot Pot wasn't far from the university, and was just two streets away. Sugar had even bought him here for a meal once. - Grimaced1yrCommented
Might want to change mouth to lips. it just sounds better.
"You know, I don't smoke or drink, and I never do dangerous things." Qin Lin leaned closer to Zhao Moqing and kissed her mouth. - Grimaced1yrCommented
Didn't he do this in a previous chapter in the tropical forest?
"Three to five meters? Is the host going to dig into the underground river?"detailAre You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?Urban · Remove the Head and Eat - Grimaced1yrCommented
Anyone else find it unusual a kid could dig 3 meters deep with bamboo in a forest in such a short time?
Soon, a pit nearly three meters deep was dug by Bell.detailAre You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?Urban · Remove the Head and Eat - Grimaced1yrCommented
Snakes don't have hands to punch, so instead it might be able to whip it's tail to impact his chest.
But Jem felt his attack did not have much force on it. Therefore, it did not cause severe damage to it. Still, that hit gave him a little time, but it was futile. The monster was able to punch him in the stomach, using its tail. Fortunately, Jem was able to use his Fortification ability in time. For that reason, the force was not as powerful as the tail-whipped a while ago. - Grimaced2yrCommented
In order words->In other words?
In order words, to be able to best your enemies, you must first know yourself perfectly. - Grimaced2yrCommented
This is a pretty dope side effect of the ability, too bad it is random.
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Tho unfortunate ones->The unfortunate ones
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If I used that, U->If I used that, I would be able
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die to the->due to the
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If I added all the things I plundered from the camo-->from the camp
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You're fine! I think it easy find typos, but hard to write a book so keep up the good work!
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it belonged to the wounded hons->wounded hobs
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that he could profer->that he could provide
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aiming his now-> aiming his bow?
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thigh->though?
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