KingFischer
KingFischer because: King of fishing (i fish sometimes) King of chess (Bobby Fischer, a chess prodigy unmatched in raw talent, afaik.) The Kingfisher, a cool bird.
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perhaps they move, but they wouldn't move any more than normal, and they certainly wouldn't "shoot up"
Ey thanks, though one does not need to be good at something to understand whether or not someone else is good or bad at something, it certainly helps when you’re trying to fix your own writing, i haven’t gotten around to writing anything lengthy yet though, so i wouldn’t say i’m any good at writing yet.
No, interesting, though i think that Problem could be dealt with better in another fashion, especially since this is fantasy/fiction, but bleeding does have it’s own uses huh, aside from coagulating a wound for better healing.
If you can tell me that they definitively resolve the issues i listed then i am willing to give it a second try? Those issues are what ultimately forced me away from the book, if they don’t get resolved I wont be able to enjoy anything else in this book no matter how good it is, simply because the author himself wrote and proceeded to forget what he wrote, there is no theorycrafting for the future of the characters in this book because its all stupid ass mc who gets in trouble and authors asspulls keeping him alive, despite having other tools at hand. Also; i already know you can’t do that, because someone else would have already done it if you could; ppl love to call out others for being wrong, but i’ll give you a chance to adress those issues yourself.
«Wow! Impressive!»? Don’t quite understand what you mean, i’ve never seen approbation used before this one time
It might be an attempt at replicatIng the suffix «-ee», as in «Evolvee» referring to a member of a group of people that have «evolved» or in this case gained wierd powers...
Oh wow, leave your injured but valuable friend alone in a base where he recently killed the leader, anyone smart would take advantage and grab jerry as a hostage. this is litterally a den of criminals, the carelessness is headache inducing.
Woulda been cooler to givE them a different name like calling themselves «sanguine» Or something akin
Whats a rheNt
Or he could just hold an item over himself or even just his hand, once he traverses it would drop down and give a sensation post consciousness transfer and he would be able to understand this fact.
Already finished the book so i dont wanna spoil u anything, but i thinK you’re right, not gonna say anything else though.
Wang Yuan’s name really reminds me of Fang Yuan (Reverend Insanity), i hope he keeps it instead of switching to Negary, despite the belief of his followers... Negary just reminds me of spongebobs pet snail.
It’s a bit convenient that he ended up very close to a place with people that worshipped a god of diseases and crows, and ended up embodying that belief since he could control both crows and ‘disease’ to some extent, are you sure that system took the protagonist aura afterall?
They do need strict designs to withstand pressure if they are going very deep since the inside of the submarine consists of air, But you can shape it how you like if you arent exceeding a certain depth, Not sure what depth that is though...