great start.[img=recommend] good grammar it follows the plot from the series but with minor changes its not ether lana or chloe but both its not no thanks to the red truck but thanks alot its not refusing to save people but saving them in a smart way. not a bad start. thanks and please keep writing

thanks for the chapter when is chapter two up ?`?

dude wtf is this ? the mc is a loser

so is he gonna be a doormat

author i’ve been looking for a fan fic worth reading and i must say that this story comes as a pleasant surprise thank you for the work 👍👍

i’m out this mc seems a bit dumb

what about flash

damm another story with incest

looks good

way to much [img=faceslap]

what a mess

im out mc sucks balls real bad i freaking hate a goody to shoes

mc is to soft like a baby

he should just leave that place

i really cant stand the mc anymore he is just a pawn easly moved by everyone[img=faceslap] is this guy really related to wolverine?

what a weakling why is he calling her ma what a loser

so his power is useless without his music [img=faceslap]

this scene is something from the wolverine movie

this is getting pretty lame

these guys are so weak man