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MCoronado1mthCommentedCh 30 The Stars (R-18)- MCoronado1mthCommented
In the future she can summon her as heroic spirit and all is within the rules
"You will not," Nero refused. "Never seek my resurrection after my death, Altrouge. Or I will haunt you from the grave; you don't want me to hate you, right?" - MCoronado7mthCommented
I would say something like survivor or adaptable. It would somehow explain how he used magic and was usefull the first time, to survive
(A/N: I had thought about an Origin that I might be giving to Felix. I want you guys to guess and for me to see what you suggested. Thanks for reading this book.) - MCoronado7mthReplied to Forgottenpain
Agreed However there are people that can use their origin for magecraft. Kiritsugu used his origin to create his bullets and shiro can use UBW also because of his origin.
If you can give me an explanation it will really help.) - MCoronado9mthCommented
Jaraiya’s hair techniques!!
In the end, Jiraiya did not have anything more to teach Kirito. The only thing which Jiraiya could teach Kirito right now is Sage Mode but according to him, Kirito is too young for that. - MCoronado9mthCommentedCh 29 Ch-29 No remorse, no rescue.
- MCoronado9mthCommentedCh 56 7th Simulation! Part 4
- MCoronado10mthCommentedCh 4 Catalizador
- MCoronado10mthReplied to Ased
A possible addition, a traking enchantment. In case he doesnt manage to kill the opponent, he will always know where it is for a next time. I think it goes well with the analisys
Number of Enchantments - 5 (Enchantments need to be more realistic, since the MC does not have a system that can create unreal enchantments out of thin air). - MCoronado10mthReplied to BorutoIsTrash
Good design! I think it would look better or less Sasuke if you swap the red and black
And while Orochimaru was witnessing the cursed scenes in the first PoV, he couldn't notice as how Mikaboshi's Sharingan spinned and evolved into something new, which is Mangekyo Sharingan, or maybe Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. - MCoronado11mthReplied to scyfly
If I remember right, the Delacaours and Malfoys are described with this hair color
Unfortunately this also meant that the woman needed to be much rougher with her scrubbing which hurt a bit. She couldn't help apologizing multiple times seeing the teary eyes of Nick but didn't stop cleaning him up. The biggest problem came from Nicks hair that was basically unsalvageable with all the stuff stuck in it requiring the woman to cut it all off with a pair of scissors. It was at this point that Nick learned that his new body had grey almost silver blonde colored hair. - MCoronado11mthCommented
A restriction could be for the user to not have a normal human eye. A loophole that should work well for him, since the eyes of his clan are not considered “normal”
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Thanks for the chapter!!
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An ancient greek named Colin? Really??
Noticing me, one of the hunters called out: «Hey, Colin! Come over here and help us!» - He has a big, muscular body, a square face with a scar over his left eye, and he's bald. This would have frightened a modern man, because he looks like some kind of bandit. However, he is my uncle or my mother's brother, a kind man who helps everyone in the village. A cool man. - MCoronado11mthCommented
Finally!!!
Sarutobi Hiruzen, who had just entered the room with several important figures from Konoha, overheard Kagutsuchi's words. "As the eldest and most authoritative member of the Uzumaki family, I hereby declare that you, Uzumaki Mito, will be expelled from our family, effective immediately," Kagutsuchi proclaimed. - MCoronado11mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: I Heard His Inner Voice
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A healing/relaxation room like the hot springs from urahara of bleach
[A/N : Ideas for the remaining 5 rooms are welcome.]