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algrife93

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a bored man who reads novels to pass time

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  • algrife93
    algrife9310d
    Commented

    he’ll just kill these “scholars” since they come from noble families(rich and influential clans)

    The corners of Jiang Di's mouth curled up as he casually commented, "This Chen Feng is rash and overly violent. He relied on his own martial strength to end those noble families, leaving no way out. He's not a hero and is not worth submitting to. Only the poor are willing to seek refuge with him, and there won't be any scholars from the noble families who will be willing to follow him. How can he fight for supremacy in the world like this?
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  • algrife93
    algrife9311d
    Commented

    No idea what this leaning mountain stance, did he bash them with his should or something?

    He simply did a simple Leaning Mountain Stance and sent Huang Ping and his horse flying.
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  • algrife93
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    Commented

    Hypocricy, if they actually obey such orders then they are no different than the ones giving the orders. the hypocricy i mention here is in real life whenever a soldier commits war crimes they always blame it on their superiors who gave the orders trying to justify their actions by saying millitary orders, when in fact both the ones who gave the orders and those who followed them should be equally guilty.

    However, disobeying a military order was a huge taboo and would be punished by military law. The soldiers did not dare to disobey and could only helplessly do as they were told and begin to pry open the dike.
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  • algrife93
    algrife9313d
    Replied to Tetractys

    It doesn’t matter, chen feng main force is himself, not his armies and not his base. if his base is taken he will just take it back, if his soldiers are dead he will recruit new ones.

    Ch 541 Intimidation and Secret Connection (2)
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  • algrife93
    algrife9313d
    Replied to Tetractys

    i don’t think zhou jing will be able to inherit it, as it’s a talent and so far he didn’t inherit the talents of the previous 2 permanent apostles , thus it will probably be unique to chen feng. Which is good, since he can get all his apostle’s achievments in their power system’s it’s inevitable that he will be far stronger than them, but them having certain uniquenesses each will mean they remain viable to act as his soldeirs, perhaps in the future zhou jing will fight alongside an army of his apostle’s, and chen feng will be the general of his army (this might happen after zhou jing goes to a few more worlds and gain more appstles)

    Ch 539 Massacre Of All (1)
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  • algrife93
    algrife9316d
    Replied to Dragoon_legion

    Great potential but trash translation, many great books were ruined because of shitty translations

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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
    Eastern Fantasy · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
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  • algrife93
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    Story has great promise, but is simply ruined by trash translation. translation after chapter 40 is simply unreadable , it is worse than MTL. this needs a rewrite, it’s very sad as the story has great promise. Great cheat(talent), 2 different power systems martial and cultivation although the names of the levels for the martial path are confusing and the entire power system isn’t structured properly or explained(as the MC himself is as clueless as the readers and he simply fumbles Away ) which is fun to see. Sadly whatever joy i could have in the novel is ruined by the TRASH TRANSLATION. if it gets a rewrite with an actual translation instead of whatever that is, then i will read again , until then i’m out. many great novels have been ruined by Trash Translation.

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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
    Eastern Fantasy · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Replied to BlueSteel

    the gravity will change , not only on planet earth making it impossible for earth lifeforms to survive. But since earth’s mass increase it causes the moon to crash on the planet destroying the planet

    A hundred years ago, the demon disaster of this world descended. When the Void Gate opened, it brought a large number of demon beasts and foreign races. The entire Earth also expanded by thousands of times.
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Replied to Chained001

    it makes it easier for the author as he relates everything to himself and our own modern world, but if it’s a native character then he will have to base his thinking and behaviour based on the native world upbringing which could be difficult for amateur authors. Just for an example , jokes or memes or wise saying and so on have to be recreated and even common sense will be different and creating all of that from scratch is a difficult thing and time consuming, ( think of how in harry potter books the wizards have their own childrens stories, their own curse words, their own jokes, their own common sense, their own history, their own Zunique culture’s(multiple wizards culture depending on region), and so on, thus making the world feel alive). on the other creating an entirely new world will certainly raise the quality of the story but the work needed for that is too much for amateur authors or authors without the ability to invest time and money. therefore by mentioning that the MC transmigrated/reincarnated it’s a lazy way that Zsaves the author a huge amount of time by using our world’s logic whenever he has a hard time progressing the story. This comment isn’t specifically to this novel as i’m still on chapter 1, but in general to all novels who uses this cheap tactic while writing fantasy stories .

    After coming to this world for three years, the opportunity to change his fate had finally arrived.
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    this yinglou i’m guessing means understood?

    "En, Yingluo."
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    bi an?

    "This bi an ..."
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    i previously thought yinglou to mean something like a “person” but here it means something akin to “here”, i hope whoever translated this novel to re translate or edit all the mistakes as there are mistakes in almost every sentence making it unreadable.

    Su Jie's casual question made Su Wu's expression turn more serious. He nodded and said, " "Not bad, Yingluo, look."
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    spatial mayfly should be a mistranslation, as the ape clone only has the improved king kong fist and the improved hard body qi

    the ape clone still has the improved spatial mayfly. It hasn't cultivated the blood refinement technique yet. If there's a suitable blood refinement technique, the ape clone's strength can increase greatly!
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
    Eastern Fantasy · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    land was repeated twice, although i’m pretty sure both law and land were translated incorrectly.

    It was indeed difficult to have great achievements in martial arts. Wealth, law, land, and land were all indispensable!
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    privy ambassador?, or isn’t he the military advisor?

    Privy Ambassador Pang Hong did not speak. He looked coldly at the officials who had revealed their ugliness and could not help but gloat.
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    is kasaya=seed?, or does it mean something like “thing”? honestly i’ve never read such poor translation before not even MTL were this poor of a quality

    "What kind of plant is this seed? It looks like the Kasaya is a little withered." Su Jie saw that the seed was a light brown color and a little wrinkled, like a dried melon seed. It looked unremarkable.
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    mayfly?

    "This gourd is filled with the blood of the blood mayfly?"
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
    Eastern Fantasy · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    since when did the demonic beast die with hatred?, i’m assuming the one who was supposed to die with hatred is the Mo fellow and not the demonic ape as written here,,,,,

    Unfortunately, the black-robed old man did not know that the murderer was not a martial artist. Under the heavy armor was a ferocious demonic beast that had died with hatred!
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    who is wufu?

    I've taken care of Wufu. su Jie heaved a sigh of relief. A hint of fear could be seen in his eyes.
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
    Eastern Fantasy · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
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  • algrife93
    algrife9317d
    Commented

    liver ?, the liver is Not located in head, brain yes bones(from the skull), blood, but definitely not liver

    The ape clone squeezed the black-robed old man's head with all five fingers, and the hard skull burst under the ape clone's kneading. His liver and brain were scattered on the ground!
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    My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts
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