writer as a hobby
Haish....lets start. The grammar is god and the plot at the beginning captured my interest. The way the novel was progressing was interesting enough for me to get my hopes up.Then came the system. I usually don't mind it that much but then *shudders*, the damn system came with a personality (ai). That shot my interest 6ft under.I find myself skimming the next chapters instead of enjoying the story with all the monologue. Keep up the good work but this fic is just not for me. Adios.
Interesting idea but the writing style is too melodramatic for me. Than there's that multiple universes mashup plot, too convoluted for me.Keep up the good work though, had to drop it because this story is not to my taste.
My guy, I have read until the current latest chapter, what a novel you have created.Keep updating, this is one of the best sign in novel that was ever written.
This novel suffers have tons of grammar issues and fight scenes but the plot is suprisingly engaging. Worth a read.
I fucking despise it when a novel does shit like this. Why set a template for Op mc and nerf the shit out of him? The damn novel was going pretty good too. My advise for future readers, read to chapter 100 and then drop this piece of hot trash.
He did 'man with a plan' sitcom and 'episodes' series. He was also in top gear for a while.
Interesting story but I had to drop it at chapter 21. The way that jared could have realised his shortcoming could have been written better instead of that forced and cringe emotional moment. Other than that it's pretty good.
Why is it that when it comes to novel like this, the mc's path are always controlled by fate or any random shit. There's always gotta be some sort of unintended consequences. The mc would also be riddled with so much emotional baggages that it made me cringe. I'm done.
Ha....the first hint of 'nationalism' showed up at chapter 266. Such a shame........................................ . . .................
Face slappinggasm/sexist heaven of a novel. Read this if you are tired and just want to relax. Don't take it seriously and you'll be fine...