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Dear Arkinslive, I saw that you asked the question as to why so many people skip through ordeals. If I may...and this is a personal opinion. I for one have been reading your story since the first day it was introduced on webnovel and I was instantly attracted to your writing style, character building, world settings, etc,etc... as such, I feel like its a drawback to writing such a great novel; alot of readers have became heavily invested in the development of Jake, although I know you've written and founded concepts involving Ruby...its somewhat hard watching Jake have to go through unfounded danger without any idea as to why, with the struggle from when he was first introduced to where he is now, it sometime comes as Ruby being a negative or a roadblock he must overcome over and over without any seen benefits. Now I will admit I do purchase the extra chapter perk every month but at times like these where some skip over chapters, I will wait til you've fully built up the ordeal so I'm not left in suspense and I'm able to read from beginning to end. Personally Ruby doesn't bother me much, I mostly enjoy reading about how Jake is evolving during each ordeal, how the faction is evolving and also curious about if their will be any territory/kingdom building within the faction and when or if Jake will become the sovereign he's destined to be, with that said with ordeals like this, its more about the anxiety or the possible hindrance to his growth that existences like Ruby may cause so I prefer to wait to pull the bandage off at one time to see how everything works out.
Whats going on? Why can't I drop my Golden tickets on this story? I have a good 20....Webnovel our author needs motivation đ¤Ź
Can a person be too good at his craft? I'm starting to think Lumydee has it set out to bankrupt me (my poor coins)...Even after I told myself, I wasn't going to read it, the temptation was too strong, luckily it seems he is vacation this week (hopefully), it gives me time to save up, lol. This novel like all his other novels are addictive, so reader beware!!! Once you start thus novel, you will be hooked. Enough of the chit-chat, I need to get back to King of Technology, hopefully that can tide me over long enough for him to update the rest đ
I usually don't leave reviews, although I like pretty much any kingdom building/sect building novel, this is getting truly hard to read even with skipping and replacing, the last month the grammar has gotten drastically worst, I really recommend hiring a proof reader if your going to continue to charge per chapter until then I may have to drop this one until further notice.
I'm forgot a major piece in this and was seriously wondering if Watson was losing his mind. He gains command of everything he fuse, so he can easily take back anything given. lol
You are correct in your review. It seems like alot of trolling. As someone stated alot of people don't bat an eye to killing people is a joke...if that was true, what do you call PTSD...so please don't make assumptions about something you haven't experienced. Also long-term separation from other people has shown to cause mental breakdowns, humans have been shown to be pack animals or exhibit herd immunity...so to go for extended periods without interactions with other humans, the main character should be a little off putting after seeing a human after so long. And for the person that said it seems like your sort of novel...I'm guessing your bias against America, but if American started putting out a bunch of movies and novels bashing China, you all would be crying for an apology....Oh but it's okay to bash America, Japan, Singapore, pretty much anybody that's not Chinese, how is that just?
đ Level headed? Did we read the same book? Sarah was basically a gold digger at the start of the story. She was with Kyle for the benefits he could provide. The same with Jake, she followed him after he exhibited his skills, she felt that her chances for survival were higher if she followed Jake despite not agreeing with how he managed things. With that being said, she is "opportunistic at best" she chooses what she believes is the best course of action for her survival. Which leads me to believe that is why she would choose Wyatt as her best option. I also saw someone mention Wyatt being level headed...did ya'll forget the fact that he basically feeds on players which crosses Jake bottom line. And the fact he is vampire makes me feel like that he won't stop anytime soon, lol.