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I always thought it was funny how famous Blackbeard was with his two-year career and commanding a Fleet of a whopping 4 ships. Yet I rarely hear mention of Ching Shih who commanded a fleet of 600 ships and at her height had an estimated 17 to 18 hundred ships under her command, on top of that she died at the age of 69 having retired of piracy and started up a Gambling Hall.
Thanks for the chapter, I really appreciate your reliability. You said you'd be back in a week and you're back in the week. I feel like if you ever end up dropping the story you'll tell us unlike many authors who just say they're taking an indefinite break, and so you check-in for a few months but then you realize the story is dead and it’s not coming back. Overall I love your book, I love the release rate, I love the reliability. This is easily among the top 10 books I've read on this site probably among the top three. You do good work and again thanks for the chapter.
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Just leave a note that the MC isn't going to be sexually abused, that was the worry that almost made me drop this great book.
MCU - Jean Grey - Storm Harry Potter - Fleur Delacour
No just no I could see her as a good parental figure and would be great as one of the MCs confidants
Could maybe see her as a friend with benefits
Might just be me but I feel like that would be weird if Yoruichi is already in the harem
Could be interesting
+1 Just like with Daphne Greengrass and Narcissa Malfoy she has great potential and can see her as good support for the MC’s ambitions.
Crossedge Did it right you just had to find a way to believably rewrite her personality otherwise no just no better than Ginny Weasley but that's about it.
I don't really know too much about their character could be interesting.
+ 1 if done right -1 if done wrong. If she gets a reality check early on maybe a near-death experience (apparently the troll wasn't enough) and losses her near-absolute trust in authority and her know it all mentality I can see her as good wife material.
+ 1(10) if done right -1 (10) if done wrong. Noodlehammer, & fg7dragon Did great in depicting her character (Especially Noodlehammer and how he shows her as wanting to see the best in anyone and being disappointed yet acknowledging reality when that is not the case). On the other hand InGlorious ( and I don't want to sound like a troll I enjoyed his writing quite a bit) made her seem like little more than a Magic 8 Ball with a bit of a Corgi personality.
+ 1 (I can see that, again just like with Greengrass she could be the one in the partnership that focuses on politics while the MC focuses on strength or research or whatnot)
+ 0 (don't really see her as wife material Maybe as some sort of attack dog on the leash)
+ 1 (I can see that, that way she could be the one in the partnership that focuses on politics while the MC focuses on strength or research or whatnot)
+ 1 (could be interesting if done right)
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