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Laylin13

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  • Laylin13
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    I always thought it was funny how famous Blackbeard was with his two-year career and commanding a Fleet of a whopping 4 ships. Yet I rarely hear mention of Ching Shih who commanded a fleet of 600 ships and at her height had an estimated 17 to 18 hundred ships under her command, on top of that she died at the age of 69 having retired of piracy and started up a Gambling Hall.

    In this same time frame, another naval activity started to gain strength in the warm waters of Central America. Piracy was becoming one of the most lucrative 'businesses' for those who didn't botter with killing and pillaging. During this time, some names quickly rose in notoriety with, maybe, Black Beard being the most famous one. The man was very much feared by everyone, merchants, soldiers, and other pirates alike. Some people even tried to give the man the title of the King of Pirates but it was denied by the man himself. Black Beard had said that he would only accept the title of 'King of Pirates' when he managed to get one of the Ravens' ships. So, it would never gonna happen. Piracy had become such a problem with the merchant ships that fleets were launched by the kingdoms to especially hunt pirates.
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  • Laylin13
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    Thanks for the chapter

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  • Laylin13
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    Thanks for the chapter, I really appreciate your reliability. You said you'd be back in a week and you're back in the week. I feel like if you ever end up dropping the story you'll tell us unlike many authors who just say they're taking an indefinite break, and so you check-in for a few months but then you realize the story is dead and it’s not coming back. Overall I love your book, I love the release rate, I love the reliability. This is easily among the top 10 books I've read on this site probably among the top three. You do good work and again thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 129 Chapter 129: Miyamoto Musashi
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  • Laylin13
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    +1

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  • Laylin13
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    Just leave a note that the MC isn't going to be sexually abused, that was the worry that almost made me drop this great book.

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  • Laylin13
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    MCU - Jean Grey - Storm Harry Potter - Fleur Delacour

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  • Laylin13
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    No just no I could see her as a good parental figure and would be great as one of the MCs confidants

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  • Laylin13
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    Could maybe see her as a friend with benefits

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    Might just be me but I feel like that would be weird if Yoruichi is already in the harem

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    Could be interesting

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    +1 Just like with Daphne Greengrass and Narcissa Malfoy she has great potential and can see her as good support for the MC’s ambitions.

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    Crossedge Did it right you just had to find a way to believably rewrite her personality otherwise no just no better than Ginny Weasley but that's about it.

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    I don't really know too much about their character could be interesting.

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 1 if done right -1 if done wrong. If she gets a reality check early on maybe a near-death experience (apparently the troll wasn't enough) and losses her near-absolute trust in authority and her know it all mentality I can see her as good wife material.

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 1(10) if done right -1 (10) if done wrong. Noodlehammer, & fg7dragon Did great in depicting her character (Especially Noodlehammer and how he shows her as wanting to see the best in anyone and being disappointed yet acknowledging reality when that is not the case). On the other hand InGlorious ( and I don't want to sound like a troll I enjoyed his writing quite a bit) made her seem like little more than a Magic 8 Ball with a bit of a Corgi personality.

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 1 (I can see that, again just like with Greengrass she could be the one in the partnership that focuses on politics while the MC focuses on strength or research or whatnot)

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 0 (don't really see her as wife material Maybe as some sort of attack dog on the leash)

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 1 (I can see that, that way she could be the one in the partnership that focuses on politics while the MC focuses on strength or research or whatnot)

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    + 1 (could be interesting if done right)

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  • Laylin13
    Laylin132yr
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    +1

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