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Suggest changing "However,..." to "But she..." and link it to the previous paragraph.
Suggest revising "He does but..." to "He is but...".
Suggest revising "Why? Does your boyfriend not around?" to "Why? Is your boyfriend not around?".
Milling? What is milling? Isn't it suppose to be milk?
xry? cry.
Yu Qi was feeling too well? Yu Qi wasn't feeling too well.
He should divorce her right away but take back all the dowry. Just give back her dowry and compensate her with money that equivalent to half a year time that she spent as his wife. And yeah, once they have a kid, he will be in the worst misery. Get rid of this kind of gold digger, users and insatiable family before it too late.
Many of your forces? Many of other forces.
Suggest revising "... I's a little painful She'll be fine in a while." to "... It's a little painful but she'll be fine in a while."
He;s? He's.
extremely jealous? Suggest revising to extremely angry or regret..
He was ruthless? Please change he to she.
Hhost? host.
Suggest revising "Hmm... I don't think so..." to "Hmm... She is fine..."
Suggest revising "Does she injured?" to "Is she okay?".
her place? Suggest revising "her place" to "her plan".
Suggest revising "Now, let's him..." to "For now, let's him...".