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Yahn2yrCommented*amoral guard? thats the only thing I thought might have been ment. if I'm wrong please disregard.
Peter was placed in solitary confinement at the mercy of the Azkaban guards, the Dementors. But the 'rat' was persistent and had cockroach-like tenacity; that tenacity to live could not be detected by the Dementors but still allowed him to maintain a sense of self and regain enough strength to transform into his Animagus form in his cell. Since Dementors have difficulty sensing the less complex emotions of animals, he could remain relatively unaffected as a rat. It was not trouble at all to the amortal guards, though, since they thought it meant he was losing his mind like every other convict in their custody, including Bellatrix and some of her fellow Death Eaters.- Yahn3yrPosted
this story has a massive amount of potential. however the problem with reading it is that it comes off as more of two separate stories. when every chapter is a switch between before and after it makes it hard (at least for me personally) to get into the story. I PERSONALLY believe that this story split into 2 a before where he works towards transitioning and an after of his exploits in dc
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could be worse....ie: wetbottom, moist...bottom, stickybottom 🤢🤮
She swatted his arm and leant in closer, and they held their silence until Neville came and mentioned that it was dinner time. He got up and offered his arm and she shyly took his offer. He then walked in silence with her to the Great Hall walking in hand in hand, with that damn Neville giving him knowing looks and sly smiles every time he looked back. Wait till I get to tease you silly Mr. Longbottom, I will make you change your name to Sillybottom when I am done with you. Harry huffed and maturely poked his tongue at Neville. Their ridiculous byplay was not lost in Ms. Granger's eyes. - Yahn3yrCommented
love the series but this particular chapter just felt kind of....I guess rushed or stilted. normally you have a good flow with plenty of background, whereas this chapter read more like a court transcript to me. just thought I'd let you know and if I'm overstepping my bounds let me know
Ch 27 C27 Kamar-Taj