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heishiken1dReplied to Alex_GutkovskIts a Translation so I have no real Influence over how this goes.
"Who wouldn't…" Lin Yan admitted, though Shakky, standing beside him, kicked him to change his tone. "Ah, no, Admiral, what do you suggest?"- heishiken1dReplied to OMN1CR0N_GAMING
Aramaki was near Wano
Lin Yan's crew, despite being in Beast Pirate territory, hadn't expected to encounter Drought Jack, notorious for his billion-bounty. The tension rose as they discussed their options. Zephyr sighed, feeling the generational gap, as his younger comrades casually equated Jack to the fearsome Emperor Kaido. If confrontation was inevitable, they seemed almost nonchalant about the prospect. - heishiken1dReplied to OMN1CR0N_GAMING
Thank you, fixed
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All i can tell you that as of now, that whole Chapter is 100% the same as the original, all the extra Contend ChatGPT added is gone, and I even looken up the RAW again. (Other then me changing Names to stay consistent since Author is constantly jumping between calling Admirals by their real Name and then their Codename)
Ch 70 Chapter 70: The Whitebeard Pirates' Last Stand (Fixed) - heishiken2dReplied to Hadjii
Hmm, I went by the estimation made by comparing Narutos height to kurama, since we know Narutos exact height at the time. That would come out to about 60m for Kurame. Also the Marine warships are massive, its just never really shown. Remember this picture? https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/onepiece/images/2/2e/Buster_Call_Arrives.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/1000?cb=20230209162129 Compare the size of the ships that are further away to the buildings.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight! - heishiken3dReplied to Hadjii
I mean its 3 Marine Warships not just one. Also Ships are way bigger the Gyuki. Like ships are massive compared to any Biju, prob around 3 times the Height/Length.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight! - heishiken3dReplied to
Pretty sure not even Kamui can transport that many people at once.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight! - heishiken3dReplied to Fairy_Tail_6627
Huh?
"Congratulations, Host! You've acquired the Mangekyō Sharingan (Obito version)!" - heishiken3dReplied to Fairy_Tail_6627
Yeah, sadly nearly every Chinese Fanfic will have things like that.
"Weren't you Long Aotian? Weren't you launching into the fray? Weren't you peerless?" - heishiken3dReplied to kwzki_inoueCh 66 Chapter 66: The Strongest Warden, Magellan
- heishiken5dReplied to Alex_Gutkovsk
He was in the New World without any naviganitional knowledge, how was he supposed to turn in the head of that guy? Its not like decay does not exist, not to mention New World Marines are not as widespread as in the other parts of the world.
He had empty pockets and bare sleeves, without a penny to his name. He was so poor that an elderly woman came knocking on his door in the middle of the night, complaining that he was disturbing their rest. - heishiken6dReplied to LordValmarCh 1 Chapter 1: The Rumble-Rumble Fruit and the Mangekyo Sharingan
- heishiken7dReplied to Abdul_Rahman_5112
I mean at least he only stole her jewlery (Story was also written before her age was ever confirmed)
"Bad luck!" Lin Yan muttered, displeased. She had tricked him, and he had planned to extort her to comfort his young soul. Instead, he got into trouble. Seeing no advantage to be gained, he turned to leave. But after a few steps, Lin Yan stopped and looked back at the unconscious Bonnie. Just leaving her there felt inappropriate. His kind heart was moved, and he decided to help her a little. - heishiken7dReplied to Abdul_Rahman_5112
Will only say its the correct translation.
They say whatever you fear most will happen. The more he didn't want to take Luffy, the more he ended up taking Luffy! Thinking about this, Kizaru sighed repeatedly. Sorry, Garp, I can't complete the task you gave me! If he had known, he would have fought Lin Yan. Win and become Hokage, lose... Ahem! - heishiken8dReplied to HadjiiCh 59 Chapter 59: The Sturdiest Shield of the Whitebeard Pirates
- heishiken8dReplied to AzraelAzrael
Do not want to change the name of the MC because its already so much work trying to find out which Character Author is talking about (He jumps around with names a lot, sometimes calling them by Codenames, then given Name etc. which is pretty time consuming) As for Swords being called knives, there should be no confusion, quickly checked the first 40 Chapters and did not mention a knife there once. But give it a try and I hope you enjoy it.
- heishiken9dReplied to Hadjii
True trusting Missions to certain Marines always leads to dissapointment, definitly not foreshadowing.
"Sigh!" Sengoku leaned back in his chair. If a neutral person like Lin had been recruited by the Navy first, how great that would have been. "Garp, give the order to closely monitor the movements of the Whitebeard Pirates. Before we engage them, make sure no other incidents occur!" Despite his disappointment, Sengoku immediately instructed Garp to handle it. Since this is the first intel, it's inappropriate to issue a bounty rashly. For now, just keep an eye on it and plan for future actions. - heishiken9dReplied to D1vineMonarch
I kind of understand this perspective, but at the same time I see what the Author is going for. If the MC had more time maybe it would be possible, the bigger Problem I think would be how to explain everything in the short Amount of time that he had. Its not like Whitebeard was going to trust him fully like Marco right at the start. Though there are definitly a few things that are not optimal in the Story, but well I liked the concept :)
Ch 57 Chapter 57: Admiral vs. One of the Four Emperors