the novel name should change to "Legend of the evil young master" it makes more sense this way readers won't quit the novel after Wuyi killing those poor kids at the fort entrance and then turning into an evil person.

this is a bad outcome, the fort lord is depicted as a very greedy and intelligent leader how does an "intelligent " leader permit a backstabber such as Gao to play him like that. You completely neglected the fort leader roll on managing an event so important as this. This are basics mistake in character building.

not just that, but the act of submitting Wuyi to this training makes no sense, as he already developed the thought of escaping the fort instead of repaying the debt to the fort master. which means that the author wants to create a moral excuse for Wuyi to not repay the debt.

I have read all chapters until today "5180", the novel has a lot of fillings. If the author would've ended it at chapter 5000 it would've been epic best novel ever. But almost 5,200 chapter and ves is still a senior mech designer, the problem with this rhythm is that as bigger galaxies appears such as Messier is obvious that being a star mech designer is not enough, so imagine spending 5,200 chapters and yet being a senior mech designer when there is only 5 ranks (apprentice, journeyman, senior, master, and star) then are we supposed to wait until chapter 20,000 for ves to achieve a realm higher than star mech designer. In my opinion the novel is already ruined there is no way exlor is going to be able to finish it without accelerating the ending. Which means what was the point of writing so many chapters exlor you were greedy, with your talent you could easily right another novel with 3000 chapters.

Sebastian, Anna, and Severus did the same and got nice results. But max get three times the price and scolded. Where is the logic of that??? Max needs a favor from neatwit. He asks three times the price and also scolds him. Max didn't skip the line it was amalia who let him go meet the guildmaster. Neatwitt and Max are supposed to be family (did you forget he is Naomi brother)?????.

All paths lead to Rome.

probably, exlor doesn't have enough time to think in veronica part of the plot at the moment with everything going on in the red galaxy.

They can have 1000 god pilots, but if they don't discover the path above God pilots, they will surely get swallowed by Messier 87.

the logic has been dropping very fast since the last chapter, probably this my last one.

they are not overreacting. The kids are alive because of a miracle. This is not earth. This is a violent world. that mistake was a tragic one.

mind reading is not insta learning. it is like reading a book or information about other people knowledge and experience. is very distracting and time-consuming. a person mind has a lot of innecessay thoughts and information in order to process all that you need a super computer of a brain. so logic is very low so far in this novel.

mind reading is a really lame skill for a mecha pilot.

This is not his first time playing the game. The system most have alarmed him about being out of nutrients. there are too many basic logical mistakes. he is not a noob clearly a professional player. so this type of death is simply not possible. is like saying a professional shooter kill himself because he mishandled his gun.

This is one of the worst novels I have ever read. and one of the worst MC developments. If you want to read going back to past, virtual game type of novel, go and read ancient world, or legendary mechanic. Don't lose your time with this one. For more details, the main character is raping and killing innocent women, kidnapping kids, super racist, treating everyone like garbage, and simply delusional. I don't know how qidian allowed this kind of content .

I don't know why, but it looks like they changed the author after this chapter.

There are too many plot savings, the lack of logic is awful, the author confused transmigration with going back in time. This is just a waste of time. If you want to read something similar but better, the ancient world is a way better option. or the legendary mechanic in case you haven't read it yet.

Did you copy from a transmigration novel? He is not being reborn in a new body. Which means He just went back in time. For me, copying is not wrong, but at least you have to be aware of this kind of mistake. he can't have a different talent just because he went back in time.

I just read the first 100 chapters, and this novel is awesome. Keep the good work. Whoever is starting, the first 10 chapters are lacking a little bit. i even made some negative comments after reading just a couple of chapters, but i changed my mind after reading the first 100 chaps, so be patient. The reading gets only better and better, and some of the logical issues like leveling to fast or stupid guy going back to pass are going to be fixed. Alex is just insanely talented in the first chapter his capability is not well explained, but meeting cronos is just the mark for the beginning of his (sss) legacy, which means he is super talented but due to that insane talent cronos decided to sent him back on time. So he is kind of a late bloomer.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

it was a really good novel. I liked the part when he created the myriad world. It's good the author didn't leave that hanging. But the ending could be better, like watching the new generation of the myriad world, creating a new legend, and then meeting chu xuan. Closing some other parts e.g. did Di Yue got a wife?, who is the new sect leader of the xuan gate, who created Hao? What is the system? Why is chu xuan compatible with the system. so many things.