Can anyone make sense of this sypnosis. The syntax is all over the place or there are two different ones mashed together.Read more.... 140 character limit

It's the world protagonist :)

Not bad in terms of future development, as the author left themselves room to expand into his past life and tie it on to his present one. What I find jarring are the conversations, the speech of the main character Delta doesn't resemble a mercenary because he is somewhat vain when speaking. Even if the author writes how he is 'cautious' in his movements, he is quite ignorant overall to his situation: but somehow acts like is fully aware of his situation, which makes him seem arrogant and quite foolish(considering he was betrayed in his past life). This is why the rating is not too high but average.

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