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Ooh I think even though Evie is afraid of her husband, because he is a vampire, she is also growing very smitten with him. Its very interesting to see the attraction grow but I feel that the frequent recalling of her past; the fear of blood red eyes, how she was raised with her closed minded human thoughts, and an attack that went into only minimum detail, kinda kills the story a bit. Its okay to have a character reflect on their fears, but so often in so few chapters, its kinda like a filler for lack of words. Love it none the less, let's keep going!